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[Prompt : -Draw or write about your cyprin's scariest moment in their life]


    It’s a cloudy day, the skies are partly turned into gray, Kieda is on his usual field research of plants near the end of light. He noticed that the light gets dimmer and slowly decreasing from the surface, Kieda decides that he have to go home early, he doesn’t need to worry about the lack of lighting since he glows in the dark. Unfortunately Kieda didn’t realize his Bioluminescence ability attracts something deep down from the abyss.

     

    It was calm and peaceful, the atmosphere was tranquil with Kieda’s glow, he swam through the kelps and corals, the rocks were huge and appear one by one towards him. Kieda stopped when he’s near gaping mouth of a deeper below, he glanced down, curious on what will he found down there if he take a little more dive. Perhaps a little time down there would satisfy him before he reach home.

     

     Suddenly he saw a roll of night with dim light, visible enough to catch Kieda’s eyes. At first Kieda was confused, he stared down, the light slowly came up. Kieda waved at what seems like another Cyprin roaming the waters, the illuminating shadow rushes upward towards him, and by that moment Kieda realized the Shadow’s monstrous figure, on attacking position, and his sharp claws are ready to leave a gash. Kieda starts swimming frantically to another direction; he panicked, starts producing his poison and tried his best to outrun the Cyprin that is getting closer and closer.

     

    Terrified, Kieda looked behind and saw how close the tremendous shadow while he’s opening his torso mouth, filled with horrific white razor sharp teeth. Kieda swung his poison layered tail and struck the Shadow’s face, rubbing the tip straight at the eyes. Soon as the blinding effect worked, Kieda rushes through the ribbons of plants, hoping that it would obscure and protect him away from what he had encountered, he looked behind and glanced at the struggling figure, and swam away.

     

    It is safe for a little while; Kieda stopped in the middle of undulating vines and large rocks, taking a breather and calm his heart, he cannot believe what he had seen. 3 minutes is not a long time, not long enough to make a long distance. Kieda heard voices of moved vines and moving water, a slight groan reached his sense of hearing. The Shadow is nearby. Kieda can feel his adrenaline surging back, his breath heaved, and silently he curled himself behind a nearby boulder.

     

    He carefully peeked and saw the monstrous figure swaying around in search. Kieda startled, he tried to keep himself quiet, he held tight his charm and shut his eyes tight. Kieda prayed and hoped that the Shadow would give up and go back to the deeps. Few tears escaped his eyes and float up.

     

    Time turns slower, the noises gradually decrease as if it’s going away. Slowly, it feels like no one was there anymore. He assumed the shadow was gone and let out a relieved sight, Kieda piled up enough courage and open his eyes to meet 2 pair of orange glaring eyes, staring upside down with a huge horrific grin.

     

    Kieda widened his sight in horror, shock paralyzed him. Lightness crept into his head and his mind went blank. Kieda can feel himself fainting from fear, the last second of his consciousness, he catch a glimpse of a different, swaying figure coming from afar. Everything went black, and he doesn’t remember the rest.

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The event is nearly ending and that's when I get an idea struck AAAAA X"DDDDD
I've been reading books about horrors from the abyss, and I'm also into Geography.
it's pretty inspiring and scary- I got a sudden woosh from those books.

though, since exams is near, I got a bit in rush and the seaweeds are MESS
gotta practice to draw underwater backgrounddddd

Jaymes is a pure nightmare fuel with a really sad backstory, I won't be able to choose between fear him or pity him qwq.
IhopeIdidntmissanydetailonJaymes-

 

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"After that day, Kieda promised himself not to conduct field research near the deep waters, alone."

 

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Jaymes (Kieda recognize him as "Shadow") belongs to LemonBagel

Species : Follow-the-Unleader

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Comments: 13

Matsuno-Jyushimatsu [2018-12-01 03:57:08 +0000 UTC]

I like the scared expression, can you teach your ways with drawing hands? XD

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SheepyButler In reply to Matsuno-Jyushimatsu [2018-12-01 05:47:53 +0000 UTC]

Me too!! I like his scared expression owo, though I need to practice how to shade it right X"DDD
drawing hands are niGHTMARE, apparently I start everything by looking at my own hand repeatedly! owo
this tutorial helps me understand hand proportional! I hope it does to you as well~!

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N-iryani [2018-11-30 04:25:07 +0000 UTC]

DEMN U DID GR8 ON THE TEEEEEEEEEEEEEETHHHS ZSZSE 

PRECIOUS ORANGE BROCOLLI MUST PROTECC AAA

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SheepyButler In reply to N-iryani [2018-11-30 08:46:24 +0000 UTC]

kasdhflksha- oMg thAnK yOU sO MUUUUCH-

ORANGE BROCOLLI-
     




where's your Cyprin dood X"DDDD

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N-iryani In reply to SheepyButler [2018-12-01 23:15:48 +0000 UTC]

np 
 
still thinkin bout le design owo

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Lymmle [2018-11-29 23:02:57 +0000 UTC]

I think the angle of the face that Jaymes has when he's looking at Kieda is a bit off, maybe you could've done it at a 1/4 angle? owo'
And the way Kieda is tilting his head looks a bit too angled-

I also see in the first panel that his chest is too wide and arms are too thin

There's more I could said but I feel like that would be nitpicking and I don't want to do that, unless you want me to-

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SheepyButler In reply to Lymmle [2018-11-30 08:39:55 +0000 UTC]

Hmmmmm, I'll note that up! X"D
the sketch is wORSE THO. Kieda's head look like it's cracked out X"DDD

idk about the chest, I think it's realistic, but I agree that the arms are too thinnnn

LMAO no need to be afraid to critique a hell outta my art because I need ittttttt >:333

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Lymmle In reply to SheepyButler [2018-11-30 16:52:45 +0000 UTC]

omg-- x"D

I don't know, the chest just looks off to me.

Eheheh, okay, I'll shove more words into your face for when you post more art--

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SheepyButler In reply to Lymmle [2018-12-02 17:03:32 +0000 UTC]

I'll be waiting for your sentences >:3

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LemonBagel [2018-11-29 04:59:40 +0000 UTC]

Jaymes is death itself, fear him because i love him adn my goal si to make him the worst cyprin possible uwu
but ty tis is lovely
im glad my son got chosen for this because its what hes meant to be

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SheepyButler In reply to LemonBagel [2018-11-30 08:44:58 +0000 UTC]

omg I gotta admit we need someone like Jaymes in the group, adding more fun to the story! 
adshkfas- eeeeeee I'm glad you like ittt!!

do you have Toyhouse?? owo

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LemonBagel In reply to SheepyButler [2018-11-30 13:14:26 +0000 UTC]

absolute disaster who has a lot of problems? absolutely needed

and ye i do this is his toyhou.se/2973985.jaymes-leon

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SheepyButler In reply to LemonBagel [2018-11-30 13:39:38 +0000 UTC]

thank you for creating him X"3

Yass~! image sent! owo

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