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shehuIk — Uncontainable rage.

Published: 2016-12-17 16:00:21 +0000 UTC; Views: 13765; Favourites: 109; Downloads: 54
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Description 1) "No... Not here.. not now.."
2) "I can.. ngh.. feel the she hulk trying to get out.. I can't hold out for much longer.. aaaHHHH.."
3) "losing control... she's taking ov-grrrr"
4) "GRAAAAA! SHE HULK IS FINALLY FREE!!"

I'm not a good writer.
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Comments: 5

FemaleTFWriter [2022-01-22 01:08:42 +0000 UTC]

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Channeleven [2018-12-10 00:02:53 +0000 UTC]

Let me take a crack at it.

1: Oh god, not again, not again!
2: Gotta calm down, t-think of calming things, like walking in the p-AARGH! Doing my Na-EAGH!
3: Taking out the garb-IGH! The garbage that's fools who get in hulks way. Destroy... Crush...
4: SMASH!

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mzxknight [2016-12-21 07:05:13 +0000 UTC]

Like the eyes changing color, getting brighter and greener as the change progresses. Also don't sell your writing ability short,  like the first three quotes, just not the last one. If she hulk were free I just picture the hair more messed, like a damp bed head, the dampness being form all the perspiration coming from ones body growing and reshaping itself, and the clothing would look more distressed. Maybe not ripped off, but definitely with some holes. Am I the worst?  

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ZeroCaim88 [2016-12-18 16:18:33 +0000 UTC]

Looks very good and your text is not bad it fits to the scene.  

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shehuIk In reply to ZeroCaim88 [2016-12-20 08:09:24 +0000 UTC]

Thanks, took me ages to get the tones just right, I've never done a sequential image before.

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