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Thank you!
Yes. She is very poor... But Takeru is always on her side.
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well i must say i truely have respect for you the way you carry on with the pages^^ its very hard to make a commic and it still is looking amazing and is very fun to read^^ keep it going
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Sorry for not commenting on your last page, I did read and enjoy it though. ^_^ (This is peligrosorebellion)
I have to say, you get better with each page. This is deffinitly the most well drawn page so far. More detail and anatomically correct.
The only things I would suggest, and point out are in the first panel, 'draged' actually has two g's. 'dragged'
And in the second panel, it would probably sound just a bit better if 'Let's be in a good mood.' was 'Let's all be in a good mood now.'
Just my opinion though. ^_^
Once again, excellent work!
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I coreccted them at once! Anytime I appreciate your kind advices!
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ooh love how you made Oto's mother from 'the enemy'
it makes everything more interesting x)
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Thank you! ^^
She was brought up in complex circumstances.
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awww, that's sweet, the protect eachother. Love it!
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Another manificent page, indeed! The story is coming together nicely and your art and style are always so beautifly done, Keep up the awsome job!!!!
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Ooo...he almost spilled the beans! xD
Awesome job, as always.
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Yes, almost!
Thank you! ^^
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Can't belive her reaction toward them, I'd of poped them each.
Aaaaand again, nicley done
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Thank you! ^^
She is a very clever and calm girl.
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wow you work fast
1 drawed and well colored page in a week or less
good job!
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yeah, fast XD when i was doing my comic i spend like a week for every page and its a pure line art comic (no shades no colors) so, yeah you work very fast XD
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A couple things- "We should be glad that whole fellows are safe now, eh?"
'Whole' should be 'all of our'... "We should be glad that all of our fellows are safe now, eh?"
fellows is fine, since I see you're using it like 'comrades'- nothing wrong with 'Fellows', it's just that 'whole fellows are safe now' would mean that she's glad some creature called a 'fellow' got out literally in "one piece."
And, that one brown wolf should say "Your mother was one of the foxes", because "was the foxes" makes it seem as if Oto's mom was the only fox around
And Takeru should say "She rescued me with gen..." :3
Still, you're much better at Translating to english than most other people I know ^^ Good work as always!
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Thank you. I corrected them at once.
I always very much appriciate your nice advices.
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It's not problem at all
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Oh! And, to make the words flow a bit better, "You have no buisness to critizice her parents" would be easier said as:
"you have no buisness criticizing her parents" ,
or "you have no right to criticize her parents!"
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Your comics are so awesome.
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Great page, so thats the story...hmmmmmmmmm. Anatomy is awesome and still love your style and coloring, keep up the good work.
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Great page as usual! I just adore your style.
Keep up the good work!
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you guys are being jack asses >/.\> bad dogs!
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yes...bad dogs.....when they are sorry then.....
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I new that
>/.\>
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I adore how Oto just doesn't care about their opinions
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Yes. She is a very clever, intelligent and affectionate girl.
...And Takeru always stood up for her... ^^
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He is good for doing that
I like Takeru and Oto, they're great =3
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I say "thank you" in place of them!
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