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Description Part 1 for the first round of

Kaiden and Alastair vs. Norse and Elly

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Audition Part 1 - [link]


Round 2: [link]
Round 3: [link]
Round 4: [link]

Wow...I finally finished part 1... This entire comic is going to take so long...I ended up writing a novel almost for the script and now it's continuously playing like a movie in my head so the idea of trying to shorten it is getting harder and harder...>.>;

If thing go as planned there will be 5ish more parts probably all about the same length as this...except part 2.
What have I done...

Norse is hard to draw...and I've just started LOL I'm doomed. XD

Norse and Elly belong to
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Comments: 38

Tepperzart [2013-01-11 14:17:29 +0000 UTC]

your prowess of writing a fluid story is so impressive. This is so incredibly fun to read.

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Khanovasi [2012-10-15 07:25:18 +0000 UTC]

You only spent about 4 hours writing all that out...
Kaiden makes me think of someone Mitchie would get along with.

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Shes-t In reply to Khanovasi [2012-10-15 19:45:54 +0000 UTC]

I was also thinking about it for the past two days before writing it out.

lol What a disastrous duo that would be...they would defeat their opponents with endless stupidity. XD

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Khanovasi In reply to Shes-t [2012-10-16 01:30:50 +0000 UTC]

Well that's a bit rude. Mitchie is beautiful and... intelligent... maybe...

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Shes-t In reply to Khanovasi [2012-10-16 02:36:34 +0000 UTC]

lol I was thinking more of my character when I used the word stupidity, I think the better word would be foolishness. They would have the best dialogues though. XD

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ScytheVale [2012-10-14 02:59:56 +0000 UTC]

ROFL!!!!
Hahahahahahahaaaa!!!! x"D Omg! This is so funny,I didn't expect the last panel when he fell off the cliff! xD

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Shes-t In reply to ScytheVale [2012-10-15 19:54:26 +0000 UTC]

Well if you're going to speak your last words you may as well make them epic. XD Glad you enjoyed it.

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ScytheVale In reply to Shes-t [2012-10-20 23:16:59 +0000 UTC]

ROFL XD But I suck at making my last words before I die! xD

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Lucky-Rainbow [2012-10-13 21:38:43 +0000 UTC]

Kaiden really needs to step up his game, or Alastair is never going to get that toaster girlfriend. Err. I mean. Return to his natural form. Yes. That.

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Shes-t In reply to Lucky-Rainbow [2012-10-15 19:58:07 +0000 UTC]

LOL Yes of course, totally his natural form. I'm still voting for that toaster girlfriend. IT'S THE BETTER CHOICE.

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darklightartist [2012-10-13 18:47:05 +0000 UTC]

Snerk...This made me giggle. So much. The last panel got me. Can't wait to see the rest.

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WarriorNun [2012-10-13 18:24:36 +0000 UTC]

....Is that a toaster?

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Shes-t In reply to WarriorNun [2012-10-13 19:42:15 +0000 UTC]

Yes. Yes it is.

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WarriorNun In reply to Shes-t [2012-10-13 22:55:19 +0000 UTC]

So his enemy is the waffle iron?

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OchoBitAnimations [2012-10-13 17:30:14 +0000 UTC]

LMAOOO!!! XD Interesting start! Can't wait to see the rest!

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Shes-t In reply to OchoBitAnimations [2012-10-15 20:03:12 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

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Howleng [2012-10-13 14:44:38 +0000 UTC]

haha poor Kaiden xD

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SpiderInks [2012-10-13 13:43:02 +0000 UTC]

It makes my eyes happy. I must have more XD. And I laughed at the last panel!

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Shes-t In reply to SpiderInks [2012-10-15 20:05:03 +0000 UTC]

XD I'm happy to hear that. I want more too, why can't this be drawn faster. OTL

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SpiderInks In reply to Shes-t [2012-10-15 21:07:54 +0000 UTC]

I know how you feel. draw faster fingers!! XD

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EpicsofNoche [2012-10-13 12:42:02 +0000 UTC]

bwhahahahhahahaha xD

I LOVE IT!

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Belphegor95 [2012-10-13 08:43:42 +0000 UTC]

Always xDDD I ALWAYS laugh when you put something like this up, love your humor man x3

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Shes-t In reply to Belphegor95 [2012-10-13 20:05:24 +0000 UTC]

lol Thank you. I'm glad you enjoy them.

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DegeneRita [2012-10-13 05:55:06 +0000 UTC]

I almost DIED when I read the last panel LOL

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onisuu [2012-10-13 04:49:51 +0000 UTC]

Aaaaahhhmgg I can'twaitforthenextpartttt! * 7 *

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Schizobot [2012-10-13 04:35:12 +0000 UTC]

Well, it looks like Norse and Elly won. XD

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Shes-t In reply to Schizobot [2012-10-13 20:03:29 +0000 UTC]

LOL Yeah...they are indeed a very sad and pathetic duo.

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TheFaceInTheTree [2012-10-13 04:25:25 +0000 UTC]

Oh my Norse is getting right to buisness isn't he As well as you I haven't even finished writing yet!

This page is awesome, simply incredible. The duos in this I think are gonna be great! We got Norse and Elly who love each other like brother and sister, and then we have Alastair and Kaiden who don't really seem to get along to well. I also like how devious Elly's little smile is (stange... what are you planning! XD) However I'm rambling now, I tend to do that when awe struck , so I'll get out of your hair and let you continue with your round.

One last thing though (sorry o_o Don't you like how in your meme Alastair said the only chance they had was against a small opponent in a dark aea, and you got the exact opposite of that Funny how things work out huh?

Anyway... amazing!

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Shes-t In reply to TheFaceInTheTree [2012-10-13 04:41:14 +0000 UTC]

lol He seemed like the kind of guy who does things he needs to do quickly in order to get to his goal quicker. Oh god...with the length of my script and how long it took me to do this I needed to start soon..

Well the planning and script writing is the most important part of a story so usually the longer you spend perfecting it the better everything will end up

Thank you~ I do enjoy this match up I can't wait to start drawing the parts where they all interact. So much fun~ X3 lol Alastair and Kaiden are friends, they just...fight a lot...

I was hoping the give Elly a more genuine smile but since her eyes aren't in the panel the smile looks more devious. >.>; I love her. She is so cute. Writing her dialogue was fun.

LOL ramble away. I enjoy reading peoples rambles.

OMG XD I know, I was thinking that when I saw the match ups. I can't decided whether it was pure coincidence or on purpose lol It's quite hilarious.

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TheFaceInTheTree In reply to Shes-t [2012-10-13 14:22:54 +0000 UTC]

I just hope I don't over do the script writing like I tend to

No problem. I like our match up as well; writing for Kaiden and Alastair will be fun. Exspecially Alastair cus I like sarcastic characters I figure the two were the kind of friends who couldn't really agree on anything.

Yeah I think it's just cus the eyes aren't there

I SHALL!!! Haha the match ups are so convient there is no way they ALL can be coincedences XD

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Shes-t In reply to TheFaceInTheTree [2012-10-13 20:00:58 +0000 UTC]

I think that as long as you make a script that you'll actually be able to finish, it'll be awesome. lol

Sarcastic characters are the best. They make for the most amusing comics. >D

EXCELLENT. lol The judges are quite sneaky.

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TheFaceInTheTree In reply to Shes-t [2012-10-13 20:31:38 +0000 UTC]

I certainly hope so! Though it might not be in color

That they do!

Indeed they are. Stirring up chaos and what not XD

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SeseMiroh [2012-10-13 04:16:37 +0000 UTC]

Ahahahah xD my Gd i love your style!

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Shes-t In reply to SeseMiroh [2012-10-13 04:41:33 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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Boo-Tay [2012-10-13 04:00:38 +0000 UTC]

Haha good opening xD

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Shes-t In reply to Boo-Tay [2012-10-13 04:41:53 +0000 UTC]

Thanks

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Boo-Tay In reply to Shes-t [2012-10-13 04:48:44 +0000 UTC]

Anytime

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SylveraDrake [2012-10-13 03:45:17 +0000 UTC]

Way to fall off a cliff to start things off there Kaiden X3
And his face while falling off said cliff makes me lawl :3
I want to read mooooaaaar!

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