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Description Yes, it is raining in the desert. This one was so much easier to draw than the last one. The next one's going to be the hardest...

Part 5 for the first round of


Kaiden and Alastair vs. Norse and Elly

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So this part ended up being completely different from what I had originally wrote in the script (aside from the end where it rains and Norse shows up). In part 4, I decided to slice Kaiden's arm open and cut off some of his hair, and suddenly part 5 completely changed...I think I like this better.

One more part...|D So close...yet so far....

With both the extention and Assassin's Creed 3 being out now the next part might take a little longer than the others have been. >.>;


Norse and Elly belong to Even though they're not really in this one.
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Comments: 38

ScytheVale [2012-11-02 06:40:29 +0000 UTC]

ROFL X"D First-Aid kit

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Lucky-Rainbow [2012-11-02 04:56:11 +0000 UTC]

Aww. Kaiden's expression was so sad. It hurt my feels.

But seriously, this tournament looks really fun. I wish I had entered.

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Leioll [2012-11-01 22:50:56 +0000 UTC]

"Whats the point in living if i cant be beautiful T.T"
I love howls moving castle :3

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Shes-t In reply to Leioll [2012-11-08 03:14:39 +0000 UTC]

XD XD That is my favourite part of that movie. lol Thank you for reminding me of it.

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Leioll In reply to Shes-t [2012-11-08 03:18:46 +0000 UTC]

!

Well thats the over all vibe i get from this part XD

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Shes-t In reply to Leioll [2012-11-08 04:38:44 +0000 UTC]

lol Yes, it does have that kind of vibe. XD XD My over dramatic princess needs to get over himself.

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Leioll In reply to Shes-t [2012-11-08 05:51:20 +0000 UTC]

oh totally. just think about it, Someone has never been beautiful their whole life. Lets cry for a little then take him to a hot bath XD

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EpicsofNoche [2012-11-01 10:48:34 +0000 UTC]

awesome

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SpiderInks [2012-10-31 21:04:07 +0000 UTC]

NUUUU. Kaiden!!! Alastair, use your magical toaster powers to save him!!!! Awesome page, and great story so far

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SeseMiroh [2012-10-31 17:22:28 +0000 UTC]

Alastair The Pretty Nurse

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Shes-t In reply to SeseMiroh [2012-10-31 19:37:02 +0000 UTC]

LOL Alastair in a nurse's outfit is the best imagery. XD

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SeseMiroh In reply to Shes-t [2012-11-01 06:41:08 +0000 UTC]

indeed! xD

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AndrogynousRabbit [2012-10-31 14:27:38 +0000 UTC]

Oh my gosh, Kaiden! DDD: -sits in exact same spot until next part comes out-

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SylveraDrake [2012-10-31 14:21:19 +0000 UTC]

Sad Kaiden made me sad But at least he and Alastair seem to be getting along a bit better~

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pikachuMew9903 [2012-10-31 12:50:12 +0000 UTC]

O_O OHHH what will happen??? I can't wait for the next part ^_^.

I never knew toasters had trays things, I now must go cheek my toaster.

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Shes-t In reply to pikachuMew9903 [2012-10-31 17:24:48 +0000 UTC]

lol Yeah, I didn't either until my roommate took ours out to clean it a while back. I don't know if all have them (and they're certainly not that big) but it gives Alastair a little more of a purpose.

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pikachuMew9903 In reply to Shes-t [2012-11-01 14:57:12 +0000 UTC]

ours didn't, so I was a little mad with our toaster. Well at least Alstair is now more helpful ^_^

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Shes-t In reply to pikachuMew9903 [2012-11-03 09:10:03 +0000 UTC]

D: D: That's horrible. I hope that one day you will be able to own a toaster with one.

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pikachuMew9903 In reply to Shes-t [2012-11-03 21:45:23 +0000 UTC]

I hope so too T-T

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CharlieK-33 [2012-10-31 11:58:28 +0000 UTC]

NUUUUUUUU!!! Dont leave it ending like that!! These two are far too adorable to hurt!!

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Shes-t In reply to CharlieK-33 [2012-10-31 19:43:14 +0000 UTC]

I was going to end it with less of a cliffhanger but I couldn't figure out how to draw, what would be, the last panel (and it was more work) so I left it for part 6 where I could skip said panel.

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CharlieK-33 In reply to Shes-t [2012-11-01 00:54:41 +0000 UTC]

Understandable, but still. So mean TT_TT Anticipating part 6

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Belphegor95 [2012-10-31 11:15:21 +0000 UTC]

.. wait... what?!?! D: that's it?!?! WHAT HAPPENED TO KAIDEN?!?!
And all of sudden feel moments, Kaiden is so cute!! QWQ and I love their relationship, brotherly-love-hate

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Shes-t In reply to Belphegor95 [2012-10-31 19:48:01 +0000 UTC]

You have mostly my laziness to thank for the cliffhanger...Though I do think it's more effective than how I had planned to end it before.

lol It was almost weird to draw them not arguing. I like drawing Kaiden's sad face...>.>;

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Belphegor95 In reply to Shes-t [2012-11-01 10:46:15 +0000 UTC]

Noooooo Laziness what have you done?!?! D:

hahah xDD naw! Awe, emotional Kaiden... he looks so cute with that face! Q_Q

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TheFaceInTheTree [2012-10-31 10:30:18 +0000 UTC]

Aww, was that genuine concern from Alastair at the end there?

Another great part my friend full of emotion and stuff I'm glad I got to be your first opponent, even though from what I've seen there's no way I'll win XD

And calm down Kaiden, it's only a little hair.

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Shes-t In reply to TheFaceInTheTree [2012-10-31 19:55:45 +0000 UTC]

Haha, yeah, what's with that. XD

Thanks, I agree! Your characters turned out to be the perfect pair to fight on the first round for the development of my story. Thank you for making the perfect characters, lol. Who ever wins in the end, it will have been an epic fight from both sides. The judges will have a really tough choice to make.

Kaiden: I lost a little bit of my soul back there...

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TheFaceInTheTree In reply to Shes-t [2012-11-01 00:46:24 +0000 UTC]

I wouldn't call 'em perfect, but I like them all the same Thanks for the compliment, and I agree, the judges are gonna have a tough choice for this one.

Elly: You want a piece of my hair? Would that make you feel better?

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Shes-t In reply to TheFaceInTheTree [2012-11-08 03:00:42 +0000 UTC]

Well, they're not perfect flaw wise, which is good because those characters are boring, lol they just work well with the flow of my story.

Kaiden: It's not the same...

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TheFaceInTheTree In reply to Shes-t [2012-11-08 03:10:20 +0000 UTC]

Glad they work for your flow Kaiden and Alastair are too funny to fit perfectly for mine, going with a darker feel I think , but there so much fun to write.

Also gonna try to host a live-stream Friday, round work and all that.

Elly: Wait come back! I'm sorry!

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Shes-t In reply to TheFaceInTheTree [2012-11-08 04:37:37 +0000 UTC]

lol and they talk way too much for me to be able to make any comic, with them in it, short...A darker comic direction sounds very cool. I can't wait.

I shall try and drop by if I can. I work until 5pm that day so I'm not sure if I will be able to.

Kaiden: It's not your fault...

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TheFaceInTheTree In reply to Shes-t [2012-11-08 11:26:58 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, I enjoy the dark stuff XP I don't think Elly's smiled once yet, and I'm almost done the first strip :\

Stop by if you can

Elly: Ok... um.... can I do anything to help?

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Shes-t In reply to TheFaceInTheTree [2012-11-10 07:34:26 +0000 UTC]

lol I enjoy dark stuff too though mostly in individual pictures. When it comes to comics I feel like I need to add humour to make it a comic...not sure why. >.> D: D: poor Elly...*hugs*



Kaiden: No...I don't think so....unless you can instantly grow it back...T.T

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TheFaceInTheTree In reply to Shes-t [2012-11-10 13:19:10 +0000 UTC]

Everyone has their own particular taste in comics. Yeah, she's got it rough round 1, I just did a count and yep not a single smile the whole strip :\ Why am I so awful to my characters

Elly: I can't... sorry

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Shes-t In reply to TheFaceInTheTree [2012-11-11 04:12:08 +0000 UTC]

I actually love reading dark comics, they're one of my favourite types. My brain just doesn't seem to like making them. >.>;

I think it's an authors/artist duty to be cruel to their characters. Sometimes it can be quite enjoyable. X3

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TheFaceInTheTree In reply to Shes-t [2012-11-11 04:56:36 +0000 UTC]

Well I may be a viable comic artist for you then. Dark is kinda my thing XP.

Well I wouldn't say enjoyable more sad, but I know what your getting at.

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DegeneRita [2012-10-31 09:25:16 +0000 UTC]

Uh-oh....what going on at the and?

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WarriorNun [2012-10-31 08:42:29 +0000 UTC]

At least the toaster cares

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