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Published: 2012-11-17 02:09:17 +0000 UTC; Views: 1131; Favourites: 37; Downloads: 3
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So technically this is the end, at least it was in my original script. But I'm thinking of adding a little more just to rap things up a bit better. So yes, there will be one more part but it'll be short (I actually already have it planned out so I'm sure this time...) I might even be able to finish it by the end of the night. (probably not 'cause I'm slow, but maybe.)Part 8 for the first round of
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wow this is intense and lovely and i /spazms.
Storytelling: you're doing it right
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I really like how you portrayed the intensity of Kaiden's emotions. Your style is fantastic.
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Thank you~ I had been waiting to do that part since the beginning. 
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:3 I bet you were excited by the finished product.
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XD I should have used that instead. lol
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Awww,poor guy,this kinda reminds me of hunger games now o_o
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lol It does doesn't it. Though, when you have a 'fight until the last one is standing' kind of scenario I suppose the similarities are inevitable.
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ewe" Yep,played that game before except there's not slaughtering involved! XD
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Haha, I hope so or you may want to consider playing different games. XD XD
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I consider playing other games...Heck,team tag was a nightmare!
When the person is IT has to try tag other people to get them to join. o_o" Once there are only a few people you have to try make it to a spot,home free,to end the game. But if everyone been caught the person who is IT wins. X_X""' It involves a lot of running..
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I remember those kind of games. So much running indeed...DX
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I know! It was a nightmare!
I was one of the fastest runners in school and everyone tries to get me because of it! Dx "Your so much funner chasing after,"they said. "Its more of the challenge,"they added. Like come on! Dx Go after the other ones!
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poor Kaiden, so much is going on.........\
.if he gets new shades it should be some wild pair!
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on the chance Noche fights Al she would create him new sunglasses :U
just saying >3<
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Kaiden: That...that would be awesome.
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angry Kai is a cute Kai. I hope he doesn't have to play by the rules...
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omg Kaidens face when he's upset, I just wanna hug him Q_Q Alistar why don't you have arms to hug him properly? He needs it!
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Oh man, he threw his glasses into the water. Priceless.
Poor Elly...washed away. And then Norse jumped in and they were lost. So sad.
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Al hugging with his electrical cord? GENIUS MY FRIEND.
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I KNOW RIGHT. LOL I'm a genius.
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I'm starting to find some pretty awesome ones now. >D
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Haha, yeah...I wanted to put the actual word there but I decided to keep my entries clean.
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Aw man.... My heart goes out to Kaiden. Poor guy, may be a goof but he needs a break.....
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I hope Elly is O.K. !?!?!
I wonder how Alstair can be out in the rain.... he must be a SUPER TOASTER 
Your doing really well on this. I wish you a lot of luck
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I think she is. She has Norse with her.
lol well as long as he's not plugged in he's just a piece of metal in the rain. XD I was half tempted to have Kaiden turn Alastair upside down and dump all the water out of him but couldn't find any good place to do so.
Thank you!
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I feel like an idiot. I should have known nothing would happen if he was not plugged in XD Wow another stupid moment for me XD
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XD Everyone is allowed to have stupid moments. lol
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just Some people more then others (me) XD
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i really love theses so much!!
The random flood is sooooo lion king XD
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I find this beautiful gem in my inbox ;W; Man this is a tear jerker 
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