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each night i crawl into a bed of faded ink stainsand i think of how you used to trace the outlines of my cheekbones
with the feathery tip of a paintbrush
and when i ran out of spare scraps of paper
i would use old windowpanes as blueprints
as you sketched out our new layout on my bare skin
and the criss-crossing scars were our latitudes and longitudes
i trace new scars
with the calloused tip of my pinkie
and i wonder why you said we needed more room
when my skin stretched taut over lean muscles
and i still can't live without the
featherlight touch of a paintbrush
as it fills in the dark circles under my eyes
and trails over the determined set of my jaw bone
and i learned long ago that you can't erase pen
so each night i crawl into a bed of faded ink stains.
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Comments: 16
beeswingblue [2011-01-21 03:28:44 +0000 UTC]
Beautiful, though painful. You've done a lovely job with imagery, here.
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beeswingblue In reply to shigureisasexybeast [2011-01-21 04:16:20 +0000 UTC]
You're very welcome...it's a lovely piece. I just noticed a little thing, though: "taught" should read "taut" in the second stanza.
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HackNScript [2011-01-21 02:15:46 +0000 UTC]
The imagery is so wonderful and the feeling is so real. I think this is amazing.
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HackNScript In reply to shigureisasexybeast [2011-01-21 02:59:59 +0000 UTC]
Honestly, my pleasure. It's the best poem I've read all day.
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AnnamaeTezuka [2011-01-19 04:13:52 +0000 UTC]
So pretty. So very pretty. Kind of tickled me in an odd way. So much so that I didn't feel the sting of nostalgia. XD But that was just me in love with the imagery.
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shigureisasexybeast In reply to AnnamaeTezuka [2011-01-19 12:45:57 +0000 UTC]
haha well thank you! and imagery was kinda the main point so that's ok if you skipped over the annoying agstyness
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AnnamaeTezuka In reply to shigureisasexybeast [2011-01-19 17:45:59 +0000 UTC]
You're welcome
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kittykittyhunter [2011-01-18 16:26:02 +0000 UTC]
It's full of imagery and very, very pretty. But it's also terribly painful.
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shigureisasexybeast In reply to kittykittyhunter [2011-01-18 22:38:44 +0000 UTC]
thank you! it's kinda sad how those things always seem to go together. (beauty, pain) XD
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