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Shimokolade — Underobservation Chapter1 Pg. 16 END

Published: 2019-06-29 23:57:52 +0000 UTC; Views: 461; Favourites: 19; Downloads: 3
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Description So this is the last page of the first chapter yay

I was practizing lately alot more with drawing clothes so I´m quite more confident how they look like.

I hope everyone likes so far my story.
please comment below what you´re thinking, your theories etc. I´m really curious about that.

The plot for the second chapter is already written down so you wont have to wait for the next update.
Inbetween from this point  the next pages will apear one week earlier on my patreon page and this also counts for my other comic Undermagic that I will update more often (shorter pages) too.



next page:

www.deviantart.com/shimokomori…



previous page:
www.deviantart.com/shimokomori…


the beginning:
www.deviantart.com/shimokomori…



Undertale belongs to Toby Fox

Error belongs to CQ

If you want to support my comics come and visit me by patreon^^


www.patreon.com/shimokomoriya

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Comments: 10

54viruses [2019-07-02 05:52:04 +0000 UTC]

Voices for eternity? Yick, that is a nightmare.

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PoisonCupcake101 [2019-06-30 04:14:52 +0000 UTC]

*GASP* Its the 4th of July SANS! -RED WHITE AND BLUE! WHOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!-

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Shimokolade In reply to PoisonCupcake101 [2019-06-30 08:20:17 +0000 UTC]

To be honest I didn´t thought of the independence day
(I don´t live in the USA )
What a funny coincidence

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Milqueandtoast [2019-06-30 03:25:42 +0000 UTC]

error has a world now! and brothers! how nice, much better than just no name and the anit void

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Shimokolade In reply to Milqueandtoast [2019-06-30 12:50:28 +0000 UTC]

True

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TheNor [2019-06-30 01:24:28 +0000 UTC]

Wow! Your art skillz just seemed to fly through the roof with this page! I feel like you've been holding back on us
    I am loving the story, loving the art (of course) and i have a little theory... im.not sure if i believe that story exactly... I'm more inclined to imagine he washed up in their world... that opening image of him in the bubble i think is more than just figurative... hmmm
   Fave panel was definitely the details on those bones when Error shouted SHUT UP!
    Can't wait for the next chapter!

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Shimokolade In reply to TheNor [2019-06-30 12:57:28 +0000 UTC]

Me too.

I can´t wait for my next page.

Only the thought what I will draw in the future plot.....

makes me really exited...

To be honest I only recently realized how to draw folds of clothes....

If you need good viewing material go to the deviantartist frostious.

She is really an expert in this and I honestly envie her for her skills.

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TheNor In reply to Shimokolade [2019-06-30 13:11:39 +0000 UTC]

YES! Frostius is one of my top fave artists! The CLOTTTEHHHHHESSSS XD omg are so beautiful ^^

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Anjel-X [2019-06-30 00:07:44 +0000 UTC]



Error (and us) waiting for "The Story"




(plz tell me they saved dem slippers!  )


...wait... three? Hmmmmm......

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LKWayvern [2019-06-30 00:05:39 +0000 UTC]

Error's alright! Ish. 
Hm. Don't got any theories at the moment. Might reread and come up with some later. 
I'm curious if we'll see the voices again though, and HOW Error locked them away. And who called the UnderObservation bros... 
...Time travel? Probably not Blueberry... 

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