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Published: 2007-12-01 17:46:06 +0000 UTC; Views: 1842; Favourites: 21; Downloads: 2
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It's not that I want your help,I need it.
Someone has to turn the demon back into a man.
A restraining hand needs to be put on my shoulder,
When my anger takes control.
When my world falls apart,
As it too often does,
I need someone to show me which piece goes where.
I don't need someone to stop me from falling,
Because I've fallen already,
I need someone to jump into the dark and pull me out.
Do you even know what you are to me?
I've hurt so many, my parents, my sister,
I don't think I could ever hurt you.
I don't think I'll ever tell you this,
But maybe you, of all people, will be able to
See it in my eyes,
Hear it in my voice,
Feel it in my touch...
"You were the first person to care,
The first to trust,
The first to understand,
And-
The first and only person I love."
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Comments: 26
TaraneePheonix [2007-12-22 22:36:06 +0000 UTC]
wow, likin it, thats great i have to say i'm phobos/sierra too lol and it really works and
for your effort
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TaraneePheonix In reply to ShiningGeisha [2007-12-26 22:37:27 +0000 UTC]
np {wow weird taranee just hugged miranda XD}
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ShiningGeisha In reply to TaraneePheonix [2007-12-27 11:52:46 +0000 UTC]
no one needs to know...*glanes around*
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TaraneePheonix In reply to ShiningGeisha [2007-12-27 12:29:50 +0000 UTC]
hehe, yeah no-one saw anything
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Phobs [2007-12-02 14:26:33 +0000 UTC]
If this for pairing Cedric/Phobos - YYEEEEEEESSS, I love you,author!~___~
Yeeey, yaoi!
*but why all fanfics on D.A. always about cartoon version,dammit,I hate cartoon!!!*)
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ShiningGeisha In reply to Phobs [2007-12-03 18:02:25 +0000 UTC]
I actually didn't think about whether it was comic or cartoon and it's for any phobos pairing, so if want it to be phobos/cedric, go ahead!
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moonscream [2007-12-02 00:46:56 +0000 UTC]
The POV is excellent X_X and coming from a person who hates fan fiction exactly for the same reason is saying something, you've done a great job, I love it...
XD Phobos/Sierra, oh man... I've been put in like my char is for real >.< must love you for that *takes a bow and gives yummy treats*
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ShiningGeisha In reply to moonscream [2007-12-03 18:07:46 +0000 UTC]
*basks in love* Thank you!
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anka-elyonka [2007-12-01 22:01:48 +0000 UTC]
Parents? I'm not agree with it. Elyon, Meridian's people (in comics also Endarno) yes, I can agree, but parents? Oo
When him parents died, Pho was a lil kid, so... yes, kids can be annoying, but...
But anyway: great job! *^^*
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ShiningGeisha In reply to anka-elyonka [2007-12-01 22:53:43 +0000 UTC]
I agree with you, but I wasn't sure what to write, so my sanity either died, or his parents so I picked the latter
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anka-elyonka In reply to ShiningGeisha [2007-12-01 22:55:47 +0000 UTC]
Uh, I understand ^^
Great this is ^^
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anka-elyonka In reply to ShiningGeisha [2007-12-20 22:26:41 +0000 UTC]
My suggestion: Endarno/Phobos XD I like this pairing ^^ and this is so cuuuute XD
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XSITION [2007-12-01 17:52:30 +0000 UTC]
I think this is good. Keeping the darkness in Phobos' POV is a must, and I think you've pulled it off pretty darn well. Good job. I like the wording, most of all. I look forward to seeing more writing from you in the future.
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ShiningGeisha In reply to XSITION [2007-12-01 18:59:04 +0000 UTC]
Thank you! I was worried about the POV.
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XSITION In reply to ShiningGeisha [2007-12-01 19:36:16 +0000 UTC]
You shouldn't be. I think it's great ^_-
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ShiningGeisha In reply to XSITION [2007-12-01 19:43:14 +0000 UTC]
On behalf of the creators of w.i.t.c.h, I take back anything bad Miranda ever said or did to Phobos.
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