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Published: 2019-08-23 14:35:21 +0000 UTC; Views: 54738; Favourites: 257; Downloads: 0
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"It's finshed!"I patted the oil stains from my hands as I looked up at my newest invention. A towering metallic tube dominated the room, connected to a large metal box at its back. A computer terminal complete with keyboard and monitor was installed on its side, and across the top of the tube was it's codename: PROJECT ACPT 0.1. Our deadline for review had been nearing distressingly quickly, so to speed things along I had to use some hardware and code from my other machines. I could adjust and specialise it once I had secured the financial support needed.
I smiled and glanced over to my assistant. "Patricia!"
Patricia was asleep at her desk again. Her head snapped up with a snort and she adjusted her disheveled glasses.
"Oh! Sorry! Yeah, Rob, what's up?"
I frowned, but ignored it. I knew that I would have problems when I hired a narcoleptic, but I needed an assistant and she was the only one that would accept my rates. I gestured to the tube. "Take a look! I finally finished the auto-closet prototype!"
"Oh, good..." she mumbled, picking up her coffee and taking a sip. "...urgh, it's cold..."
"Something like this could completely revolutionise day to day life... a person's entire outfit and appearance, able to be altered at the push of a button. Why, if we can get it working right, there'd soon be one in everyhome! We'd become household names! Isn't that exciting, Patricia?"
"...zzzzz..."
"Patricia!" I grabbed her should and shook her roughly. She jerked awake, grumbling to herself and nodding quickly. "Y-Yeah, yeah, I totally agree!"
I rolled my eyes and stood up. "Well then, all that's left to do now is test it. If we can confirm it works, it should be a snap to get the funding needed to perfect it."
"Mmm, yeah..." Patricia yawned before adjusting her glasses again. "So who's the test subject?"
"Myself, of course."
Patricia paused and looked over at me, eyes scanning up and down my body. I wasn't the largest of men, my slimmer physique making it clear I was more of an academic than an athlete. With my short, neatly combed hair, white lab coat and square spectacles, I admittedly looked almost stereotypically like a scientist.
"...you sure that's a good idea, boss?" Patricia asked, propping her chin up on her arm as she struggled to keep her eyelids open. "I mean, what if something goes wrong?"
"Nonsense," I strode over to the machine, the tube doors opening automatically. "As long as you stay alert and keep an eye for any errors, everything should be fine. Now..." I entered the tube, and the doors closed shut behind me.
I stood still, the interior lights shining down on me as a few moments of silence passed. Finally I heard the machine whirr to life. Of course, little did I know what was happening outside. While I couldn't say for certain, I could take an educated guess based one what I saw when I exited.
My first sign something was wrong was when metallic arms quickly shot down from the ceiling, literally tearing my clothes from my body.
"Wh-hey!" I yelled, soon standing nude. Sure, they were meant to undress the user first, but to be this rough... I foolishly assumed that they would just need some calibration upon the end of the test.
This thought was put to an end when I felt cold metal grip my shoulders and hoist me into the air, while other arms clamped an enormous mold around my body from the neck down. I recognised it as coming from one of the other machines I cannibalised parts from, a prototype for android mass production. But I hadn't included any code to utilise it! ...had I?
I didn't have time to complain as tubes connected to the mold and an off-white goop was fed into the machine, which I identified as the same substance used for the android's synthetic flesh. More arms, these ones ending in electrical programming tools, began to zap the mold and send jolts of electricity through it and elicit yelps from me with every shock. This had been one of my proudest inventions and one I was most frustrated that no one was interested in; the fleshy substance was capable of reacting to electricity in a way that replicated common circuitry, essentially allowing internal systems to be created while an android's flesh was being created. And now it was being used on me!
The mold finally pulled apart, revealing my new body, and I couldn't help but scream. From the neck down, I was coated in the same off-white skin all synthetics had, but I had a much svelter, curvier, and more hourglass shape. It had used the gynoid mold! I stared down at the breasts that now covered my own chest, trying to pull the rubbery skin off... but my body refused to move. Of course, the circuitry had already been implemented. My body would only do as programmed!
I didn't have time to think of a way out, as without warning a metal face plate was lowered down and clamped over my head. I tried to scream for Patricia, but the mask was so tight I couldn't even let out more than a muffled grunt. The face that now covered mine was a standard-grade gynoid face plate, almost mannequin-like with a pair of blue, almond-shaped lens over the eyes.
A silver wig was lowered onto my head, and with a few zaps bonded with my metal scalp, before more arms lowered down and began to dress me. I yelled once again for Patricia to stop the machine, but the faceplate muffled it all to a barely perceptible "mmph!" as I was soon dressed.
A pair of black high heels were on my feet, altering my stance and emphasising my now-shapely legs all the way up to the puffy, petticoated skirt draped over my hips. Sais skirt was part of a black dress, made of a nice-yet-cheap satin with puffy sleeves and white frills. The white apron and headband completed the outfit.
I now looked from head to toe like some kind of synthetic maid!
The doors opened, and my legs moved on their own as I marched out, my stiletto heels clackng loudly upon the tiled floor. I saw Patricia unconscious at the AC's terminal, her hair top stained with cold coffee. Under the brown stains, the console's monitor had the word "ERROR" flashing repeatedly in red, the rest of the text a garbled mess.
Patricia probably sat down at the console and set her coffee on the console as she typed the start-up commands in, just as her narcolepsy kicked in again. She would have slumped over the console hard enough that her cup fell over, spilling its contents over the delicate electronics. And with her too comatose to even hear the beeping or error alerts...
Despite my best efforts, my body simply forced me to stand still until Patricia finally awoke. She slowly sat up, looking around before her eyes finally fell upon me.
"Oh... hey there," she said, scratching at her head. "Argh, I'm a mess... when did you get here? Rob never told me the lab had a maid-bot... did he already go home?"
No! I AM Rob! Something was wrong with the machine, I said! At least, that's what I wanted to say. Instead, my head remained completely still as my assistant stood and removed her sweater.
"I guess he must've already gone home then... alrighty. Uh, you, maid," she pointed to me, and I felt myself perk up. "Why don't you go ahead and clean the lab? I'm gonna head home and change... and I guess I'll let the investors know the machine's ready for review."
Patricia, don't! There's something wrong with it, it's not ready yet! But again, all that came out was a tiny "mmph!" as my body gripped the edges of my dress and dipped into a pre-programmed curtsy. Patricia stood up and walked out, grabbing her coat, while I simply began to move to and fro in the lap, putting tools and machinery away before grabbing the cleaning materials.
All the while, I screamed, I yelled, I sobbed, I pleaded. But it was all silenced under my metallic face, while my body simply obeyed the commands it was given.
I was completely trapped.
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LightReading2 [2022-05-18 22:46:37 +0000 UTC]
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ShinMakeovers In reply to LightReading2 [2022-05-19 11:27:11 +0000 UTC]
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charoset [2019-09-23 03:19:18 +0000 UTC]
I'm still happy you entered, we all just make duds and your version of a "dud" is still pretty good.
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sortimid [2019-09-05 12:08:51 +0000 UTC]
This piece is very uneven. The transformation is interesting, and all the technical details make sense, but, like the other judges already mentioned, the characters' behavior is flabbergasting. Why would Rob test the machine on himself? Why not a mannequin, first? How could he expect his narcoleptic assistant to stay alert? Why isn't Patricia alarmed at the sudden appearance of a maid bot? These questions made it hard for me to enjoy your well-crafted TF.
It's also a bummer to find a typo in the very first sentence. Any spell checker would have caught it. It just screams lack of polish and makes me feel neglected as a reader.
I'm sorry you were sick, I hope you're feeling better. It's a shame because I know you can write. I look forward to future entries. Thanks for sharing and keep up the good work!
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ShinMakeovers In reply to sortimid [2019-09-05 17:36:20 +0000 UTC]
First sentence? What typ-OH GOD DAMN IT. How the hell did I miss that? I even ran it through a spell-checker to try and I still missed it. *headdesk, headdesk, headdesk*
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sortimid In reply to ShinMakeovers [2019-09-05 19:17:12 +0000 UTC]
Don't be too hard on yourself. It can happen to anyone
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flashkill455 [2019-09-03 23:53:06 +0000 UTC]
Well its certainly to my tastes I have to agree with charo on the sillyness of it. In trying to set up the pieces explaining how this all occurs you end up making it rather unbelievable that it did happen. For example instead of narcolepsy, maybe shes just hungover; that way its not a permanent behavior the scientist should be aware of.Β
Maybe if you had gone all in on the comedy angle of things to just make this the biggest autocloset fuck up of all time then the nonsense actually would have contributed to it all.Β
Since you had all those extra words I think you could have given it more of an epilogue to make it more than just another autocloset mishap.
I do want to say I enjoyed it overall and the fetishes present are certainly to my liking. I just think its a bit standard as things go even with your fun style of writing.
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ShinMakeovers In reply to flashkill455 [2019-09-04 17:47:53 +0000 UTC]
Yeah, I admit a lot of these were pretty obvious issues. I was trying to make it sort of comedic, but I should have taken it farther, as well as reworked the ending to suit that.
As said, I'll try to do better next time.
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charoset [2019-09-03 02:58:27 +0000 UTC]
So I usually look forward to all your entries since you always do good work, though I can also see your disappointment in this one. I think the issue is the characters have a big case of the stupids. And don't get me wrong it's well written despite the various errors throughout of which I'll include a list of after this point, but it's not the most well thought out of tg's. Like he knows she's narcoleptic and she even says he shouldn't be the subject. There should have been some explanation for why she couldn't do it like her passing out would be a safety hazard in the machine or something.
Also the gel. While it's a novel concept and he was cannibalizing other machines, it just seems dumb that he wouldn't clear out all the gunk that's probably incredibly expensive lab material while he's tight on budget. Like rogue code he forgot to delete that causes the issue, sure! Large amounts of experimental material he had to have handled when he was taking the parts to the machine, less sure. As for the mistakes:
"top of the tube was it's codename:" its
"had been nearing distressingly quickly" two adverbs in a row is awkward, should be "quick"
"be one in everyhome!" every home
"I grabbed her should and" shoulder
"based one what I saw when I exited." on
"pair of blue, almond-shaped lens" lenses
"my stiletto heels clackng loudly" clacking
Yeah, overall it's not a bad entry by any stretch of the imagination. It just isn't as tightly written as it could be and isn't the most thought out, but it was still entertaining and well written to me. Thanks for entering.
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ShinMakeovers In reply to charoset [2019-09-03 17:15:25 +0000 UTC]
Yeah, I admit I've got no excuse for this. I had to write it while sick and simply couldn't give it my all. I probably should've skipped this one, but I already had to miss out on the fighting game contest for similar reasons and I didn't want to miss another one.
Still, thanks for the comment and judgement. I'll try to do better next time.
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Kenneth2Willow [2019-08-27 02:20:22 +0000 UTC]
I enjoyed this story! Most auto closet stories have to do really good in order to get me interested, but I really like this one! I'm not sure if I missed anything, but I'm not sure how it made Rob do every command. Though a major thing I enjoyed was the character of Patricia, I found her entertaining! Good story!
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ShinMakeovers In reply to Kenneth2Willow [2019-08-27 13:19:12 +0000 UTC]
Thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed it.
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Thomamorph [2019-08-23 16:39:08 +0000 UTC]
Interesting.Β
What I'd like to know is how he isn't suffocating in there. Unless some sort of life-support system is built intoΒ it, this could end very badly.Β Does he have a source of food and water or some means of eliminating waste?Β Yeah, I'm that kind of reader.
Has the main character been transformed or has he simply encased and trapped?Β Yeah, I know there's quite a tradition of stories where mechanical arms come out and reshape somebody's body without inflicting traumatic or fatal injuries somehow, so I guess it's really intended to be that kind of transformationΒ and that's the spirit in which I should take it.Β
There are some nice comedic touches here.
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ShinMakeovers In reply to Thomamorph [2019-08-25 18:37:35 +0000 UTC]
I'm glad you enjoy it.
As for your questions, the mask isn't air-tight, it's just too small to let him move his mouth much. And as for food, water, and waste, well... let's just say that's likely when people will realise where the maid-bot came from.
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Gaminglover [2019-08-23 16:30:54 +0000 UTC]
As always a well written story coming from you. The concept, while not super original was given originality by your word choice and setting. Plus the addition of a wife really did help the overall narrative structure. Great work.
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ShinMakeovers In reply to Gaminglover [2019-08-25 18:36:14 +0000 UTC]
Thank you. I'm glad you liked it.
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TamSketchit [2019-08-23 15:25:22 +0000 UTC]
Honestly wish there was a follow up to this, or like an epilogue, just to know what happens after the story ends.
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ShinMakeovers In reply to TamSketchit [2019-08-25 18:36:01 +0000 UTC]
Maybe in the future.
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random-person-sayshi [2019-08-23 14:59:54 +0000 UTC]
"Nonsense," I strode over to the machine, the tube doors opening automatically. "As long as you stay alert and keep an eye for any errors, everything should be fine. Now..." I entered the tube, and the doors closed shut behind me."
idiot,you know they wont be able to do that! a real smart person would have sent the asistant in and kept watch themselves.
that said:good story.
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ShinMakeovers In reply to random-person-sayshi [2019-08-25 18:35:52 +0000 UTC]
Glad you like it. I really wanted that to be an obvious "you idiot" moment, so I'm glad someone commented on it so quickly.
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