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Description Has ha! told you I'd get the next pages up tonight didn't I? ;-D We continue where we lastleft alister sitting alone top of an old hill.

The last time you saw it was covered in gras. Check out the first three panels. Notice how they look identical. But the color and scenery is changing. It's a transition. A transition of alister looking from the past and back to the present.

Fastoon before...sunny and busy. Fastoon after ,dark and lifeless. He seems pretty tired after thinking about this. He just flops on his back. Wish I came up with a better landing sound than 'WUMP!' X-3

Now we see on the next page that this hill was no ordinary hill. It's a hill very special to Alister because it was where he and his friends used to hang out when he was a young lombax. Note the wierd looking first panel i nthe second row. We're again showing another transition. This time we're going back to young alister. Back when this hill had grass too. =-p

The next two panels kinda rotate a little revealing another golden lombax lying next to young alister. It's none other tha nhis best friend Kaden!! =-D

Now the final panel shows four lombaxes total. Young Alister and young Kaden are established. But look to the left. A young Sin lying there too. He looks kinda bored. Or sleepy.

But near the top of the final panel, we see a female lombax. Who is she? I assigned her no name for a reason. She's Kaden's future wife. we never kne who she was, so I am guestimating on what she would look like to me.

Alister's face kinda looks funny youngr. He kinda look a bit chunky. Kaden's future wife coulda looked better too.

But hey; if I ever wanna do edits I'll do the mlater. I gotta get my story told right now though.

So enjoy for now. The next two pages are being worked on as well. They should be up by tonight too!! =-D

Alister Azimuth, Kaden, and Kaden's Wife are (c) to Insomniac Games
Sin is (c) to me shinragod.
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Comments: 34

Lombaxlovver [2011-07-05 15:02:56 +0000 UTC]

Good, but I think Kaden's wife name was Carlayla.

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shinragod In reply to Lombaxlovver [2011-07-06 17:17:06 +0000 UTC]

Really?
where might I find that piece of info?

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Lombaxlovver In reply to shinragod [2011-07-10 00:42:54 +0000 UTC]

From Hojablue or Lombax-world-creator, I think.

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shinragod In reply to Lombaxlovver [2011-07-10 07:10:04 +0000 UTC]

Oh. So you sure this isn't some fan creation?

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Lombaxlovver In reply to shinragod [2011-07-11 13:59:55 +0000 UTC]

Ok, fancreation, yes, but, really,I want to think her name's Carlayla,hehehe.

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shinragod In reply to Lombaxlovver [2011-07-11 16:16:56 +0000 UTC]

I guess Zeema wasn't doing it for you huh?

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Lombaxlovver In reply to shinragod [2011-07-11 16:25:51 +0000 UTC]

No, no, no, it's so good, Iยดm thinking she was another female lombax that Kaden and Alister met, but no, there's no problem, it's your creation, not mine, it's excellent your job.

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shinragod In reply to Lombaxlovver [2011-07-11 16:26:57 +0000 UTC]

Heh heh. That's fine. XD

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Rachiibabes [2010-01-31 12:22:33 +0000 UTC]

Maybe Barge had Sin up the night before doing a night training exercise. Maybe that's why he's looking bit sleepy.

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shinragod In reply to Rachiibabes [2010-02-01 05:08:36 +0000 UTC]

Maybe. ;-B Lord knows how many hours of actual sleep he gets.

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Rachiibabes In reply to shinragod [2010-02-02 17:57:35 +0000 UTC]

Sin: SHADDUP 'N' LEMME SLEEP!! (falls over backwards) ZZZZZZZZ!!!!

Sorry, couldn't resist it!

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shinragod In reply to Rachiibabes [2010-02-02 17:58:33 +0000 UTC]

ROFL!! I love it. ;-D

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Hedgey [2010-01-11 17:44:18 +0000 UTC]

I seriously love how you did Fastoon being destroyed panel by panel, that was genius!

Another great page, I love the little friendship group ^^

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Rachiibabes [2009-12-28 20:06:25 +0000 UTC]

I had a feeling Sin would be in this, LOL. I notice that there's a lot more muscle on him than the others. Must be all that training with Barge.

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shinragod In reply to Rachiibabes [2009-12-28 20:09:29 +0000 UTC]

Well I need to have Sin connect to all this somehow. ;-3
And you're right; Barge has been working Sin over since he was like six. That's why he's muscular for a kid. ;-3

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RatchetJak [2009-11-25 02:35:14 +0000 UTC]

Hehe like I said before and it will probably get old but another nicely edited page. I like how did the shift on the panels of the right hand side where Alister goes back to thinking about his past, it was a nice effect. Anyways, nice work. ^^

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shinragod In reply to RatchetJak [2009-11-25 16:32:58 +0000 UTC]

Thank you. I wanted to get that effect. And hopefully peopel will get used to it. It won't be the last time I employ this technique in the story.
Thansk again for the comment!!

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RatchetJak In reply to shinragod [2009-11-25 19:36:16 +0000 UTC]

Indeedy hehe.
You're welcome. ^^

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discosmackdown [2009-11-23 02:33:16 +0000 UTC]

this is brilliant! poor Azzie...he really looks melancholy, visualizing pre-War Fastoon as reality fades in to reveal what it is today. i have to say though, my favorite panels have to be #5 and #11.

i like #5 because he just looks so "blah", like he's so tired but he knows he can't do anything about it XD

and #11 is just adorable anyway because of all of them as children. i think you did Alister the best, and Ratchet's mother as well. i can't wait to see how she does in future pages

anyway, great work as always! off to read the next pages!

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shinragod In reply to discosmackdown [2009-11-23 06:24:06 +0000 UTC]

Yeah! Isn't that funny how alister just flops o nthe ground like that. Like 'Aw man! how long am Igonna have to endure this shit?'
(He's no fun. He fell over. =-p)
Well I'm very pleased Alister turned out to be the best. As the story has him as his main focus it's important. But Iam also glad you like how Kaden's wife looks too. Even though I never saw her; I figured she's vital to the drama of this story. I mean after all; if Kade nis Alister's closest friend, surely he knew about the relationship Kaden and Ratchet's mother shared.So you saying she looks real good makes me happy!
Thanks so muhc for your feedback!! I look forward to completign the next few pages; hopefully this week. =-D

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xXSugarHiNightmareXx [2009-11-22 21:15:34 +0000 UTC]

hehe nice, they look so cute ^^

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shinragod In reply to xXSugarHiNightmareXx [2009-11-25 16:34:29 +0000 UTC]

Awe thanks hon. ^__^

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iNconceivable005 [2009-11-22 21:04:27 +0000 UTC]

I like the transition you did. At first I thought it was some kind of gas and it knocked him out

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shinragod In reply to iNconceivable005 [2009-11-22 22:54:50 +0000 UTC]

Yeah I guess the purpleness of the atmosphere would lead one to assume that. Thanks so much though. :-3

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MintyMousyX [2009-11-22 16:57:21 +0000 UTC]

I wonder know what they're dreaming now

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shinragod In reply to MintyMousyX [2009-11-22 18:49:51 +0000 UTC]

Sin seems to be dreaming of strangling his creator for putting him in this turkey. X-3

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MintyMousyX In reply to shinragod [2009-11-23 17:12:36 +0000 UTC]

O.O

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true-crystalwolf [2009-11-22 08:34:15 +0000 UTC]

i really like the expressions on this page especially sin's also the mist like effect on the first few panels is really good to

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shinragod In reply to true-crystalwolf [2009-11-22 18:50:36 +0000 UTC]

Thanks very much. Yeah I gotta good chuckle outta Sin's expression too. X-3

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Shineman [2009-11-22 05:30:40 +0000 UTC]

This looks awesome, the narration is good, and you captured the emotions just right bro. ^_~

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shinragod In reply to Shineman [2009-11-22 05:37:55 +0000 UTC]

Excellent!! thanks so much bro!!

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Shineman In reply to shinragod [2009-11-22 17:20:18 +0000 UTC]

Your welcome bro *glomps* ^_^

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zarothaa In reply to shinragod [2009-11-22 05:41:20 +0000 UTC]

I love how powerful and emotional it is , Awasome job bro!

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shinragod In reply to zarothaa [2009-11-22 05:45:31 +0000 UTC]

SWEET! ^__^ thank you. =-3

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