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“Umm I was actually asking about, why are we all Shinys?” “Oh that was luck” XD
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Hey there, it's me again!
I want to tell you about some mistakes you made regarding some of the words.
First panel: it's "these" not "this".
Fourth panel: in Xatu's speech: it's "their worlds" not "there worlds". Also, you should put "than" instead of "then" in both "more then two" phrases (this one can be easy to mistake at times).
Fifth panel: you messed two words, both in Jirachi's speech. In the first speech: "desampare"? I think you mean "disappear". And in the second: it's "are" not "ara".
Sixth Panel: Alejandro's speech: It's "Why didn't you warn Jirachi this would happen?". Xatu's speech: the "look" should be written as "looked".
And in the panel before the last: Xatu's speech: the "in to" part should be written as " into".
That's about it. My apologies if I'm being too much a bother.
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It's really helpful actually
is mainly my fault
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No worries.
As I said, I'll keep an eye on the grammar and tell whether something's wrong.
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Would you like to become my editor?
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Meaning check whether the spelling or grammar is as it should? I don't mind.
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Do you have messenger or discord
or anything so I could send you the pages
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Hangouts or Skype.
But one question before that: if I spot mistakes, will I modify them myself or tell you where the mistakes are? I ask this because I'm a writer. I mainly use Word as tool of trade.
Almost forgot: I can always give you my mail if you want.
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Just tell me and I'll fixed them
but I'm open to suggestions on whatever you think is better
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Good for me. I'll send you a note with my email. Send me the pages, I'll look over them and I'll send you a Word file with the necessary modifications (if any required that is).
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Got it.
Now then: Hangouts, Skype or mail. Which one suits you better?
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From those
I only have mail
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I have one: Do Zigzagoon exits in this comic?
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