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Published: 2018-04-06 12:54:48 +0000 UTC; Views: 1010; Favourites: 12; Downloads: 0
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thought it was a fun way to start the actionedit 12/05: took some advice from missblanketburrito in the comments and made the plasma blast more dynamic!
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Good start to a comic! I have to say my favorite thing in this comic is seeing the perspective from behind Shego. It makes you view Ron as Shego views Ron--as an imp to destroy.
The slinging neon plasma could have a bit more action...it doesn't look like it's flying at Ron. Maybe try overlapping the form of the plasma over the other art panels, or making the plasma trail more dynamic, or give a foreshenting view of the plasma. Or you could have done a close up of Ron with extreme neon highlights in his pupils and on his face, signaling that the plasma is coming directly at him.
The shape of the bottom panel was an excellent choice. It gave a wide enough foreground to show multiple actions by Kim and Ron as they retreat. Nice!
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Hey, thanks for the feedback! I think having the plasma overlapping the other panels is a great idea β might give it a shot when Iβve got time!
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You shouldn't have poked an angry bear, Ron! XD
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Your Bonnie avatar makes that comment all the better lol
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Heh. Heβs about to learn that lesson the hard way
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