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I ALTERED THE STORY TO MAKE IT FIT MORE. CINDERKIT DOES NOT EXIST. I LOVE HER (CINDERXFIRE) BUT YOU HAVE TO BE HIS APPRENTICE, NOT HER!
PLUS I MIGHT CHANGE OTHER THINGS.
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You skitter out of the nursery. "I want to meet the kittypet!"
A ginger tom by the fresh kill pile glances over. He has stunning green eyes. He walks over. "Hello," he said, a little shy. You remember he only joined a few days ago.
"Hi! I'm ___kit! Who're you?"
"Firepaw..." He shuffles his paws.
"Cool!"
Then you hear your mother's voice calling you. "Bye, Firepaw!" You call as you go back into the nursery.
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A while later, you watch as he sobs with his best friend over the death of Lionheart. You and Firepaw have gotten to know eachother a little, and you can see he has feelings for Spottedleaf. This bothers you but you don't know why.
"Firepaw," you say softly, your eyes feeling a little watery.
"____kit! Hi!" He says, trying to look cheerful. Then Bluestar comes and takes Lionheart's body. "Go to bed, all of you," she sighs.
You have no choice, so you listen to your leader.
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Yellowfang has taken over as Medicine cat, since spottedleaf died. You see Sandpaw around Firepaw frequently, which angers you- he is your friend!
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You see this happening more and more after he becomes a warrior! But it doesn't matter because you're becoming an apprentice.
"___kit, do you promise to honor the path StarClan has set for you?" Bluestar speaks the words.
"I do!" Your voice rings across the clearing.
"Then by the powers of StarClan I name you ___paw! Your mentor will be Fireheart. I know he will pass down courage and loyalty."
You feel excitement rush through you. You run up to your mentor and touch noses happily. You look at his face and decide he seems happy about it also.
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"Alright! For our first lesson we're going to hunt!"
Your thoughts had been on your brother, who was medicine apprentice to Yellowfang. "Huh?"
"I said, Hunting!"
"Oh, sorry. Let's go!"
You follow the bright gigner tom through the forest until you come across a large tree. "This is the owl tree," he says. "sometimes there is mice here."
You scent and smell a scent you know from eating mice. It's your favorite! This time it smells so much better- so alive! You drop into a crouch- and step on a leaf.
Fireheart laughs. "Just testing your ability. Here's how to do the crouch." He slips into a sleeker crouch, without his shoulders stiff.
You copy it and sniff. Your mouse seems to have come back. You step forward very likely and see it- and small, gray creature. It's very chubby and moves rather slowly. You instinctively leap forward and give it a swift bite to the next.
You turn around and show it to your mentor. "Good job!" he smiles. "We'll hunt birds tomorrow- meanwhile, it's getting late. Let's go back to camp!"
You nod and, mouse in mouth, follow your mentor.