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Shironek0 — DOUBLE SUNDAY 22 (DBZ AU RADITZ DOUJIN )
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Published: 2015-10-20 02:48:12 +0000 UTC; Views: 8140; Favourites: 65; Downloads: 22
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Plz, Let me know what you think of my doujin X3
Page 23: fav.me/d9s9s4w Cover: fav.me/d9mhqir
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hehehe, gostei da mudança, dos tiros para um diálogo mais... calmo ^^ O último quadro ficou ótimo, ela é tão linda nesta pose.... e pelo visto ela gastou MUITA munição, lol! XDDDD
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Thanks and Yes, I will ^^
Just working on its cover, would you like to give a sugestion for the nexts pages?
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i don't think i can have ideas like that
but am i did use to think lunch was fused together
with another part of saiyan when she was younger
lets say another saiyan come to earth before goku but she
crashed and was badly injured, she would have survived when lunch
as a child found her then the saiyan girl forcefully fused them together and lunch
memory from then on was very selective with the other saiyan in charge of them
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omg really? you mean for her life story ?
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well i had this idea that raditz secretly had a harem of girls
form other planets he hid from frezza
like at the times vegeta was training with nappa raditzs was
just visiting other planets and kinda collecting girls this is why he never trained
or gotten stronger XD
but this might not help your story
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man I can't believe it took me this long to find the last 2 pages, great story I so want to read more so bad
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Thanks, is good to know that people like this ^^
Do you want to sugest something for the new pages?
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Raditz and Lunch could go a journey for the Dragon Balls in order to make her and her sister two separate people, and along the way Raditz might begin to fall for both of them
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Thanks, I love your idea!!! I was thinking something similar to "resolve her little problem"
Actually Im writing it in order clear my ideas and events and line time
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AHHH I love this!
Can't wait to read more!! I totally ship it now!
And Raddy must really like her, he's being all nice and sweet!
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Thank you ^^
Im happy that you like these two as a ship, and is super rare to find a roumantic doujin about Raditz :3
I would keep going with them
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You are talking about Raditz you know?
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I love this doujin, there's not nearly enough Raditz love
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You're right!!!, I would like to see more doujin about him X3
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Best Raditz what-if EVER! Hope they have a boy named Raditz Jr!
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Thanks, I'm glad that you like my version of Raditz "good guy"
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raditz si que es un buen tipo XD
quedo genial la onomatopeta del ratataataa!!
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En realidad no XD pero tu sabes, cuando te gusta alguien tiendes a actuar de una manera diferente...
estoy pensando en seguir un poco mas con el doujin...
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toda la razon! y deberias seguir un poco mas que esta muy bueno!! soft porn!!
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Una segunda parte entonces, tendre ordenar mis ideas porque no es facil complicar la vida de Raditz ...
Y "soft porn"? Vere que puedo hacer al respecto, porque creo que mi Raditz esta muy bueno y paciente con estas dos
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Goddamnit, I totally shipped the idea of Launch secretly being Usagi's mom and Tien's her dad, but now I could TOTALLY get behind this head canon.
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I had never thought of that o.0
But I agree that these two look good together, or maybe they are a trio?
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Haha, I can't get over the crazy ass sex possible with the blonde half of Launch. You know she'd love it rough.
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I really but really love your comic about Raditz,there's only one problem you should update more often ☺️ keep going
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Thanks!!! Im happy that you like it ^^
At the beginning it was supposed the doujin should only have 20 pages
but it seems that I will have to lengthen it a little more ...
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ME TOO!!!
I'm not sure how this will end but I'll see what to do with these three XD
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Ahhh I ship this. I totally ship this. This is so cute.
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Yay!!! X3 yes! yes! yeeees!!! Lets ship them!!! XD
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*begins to sketch a picture*
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Oh yay! You made a new page 
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Thanks ^^
I think this doujin would need more pages but firts a cover :3
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third panel should be : um, no you're not, I should apologize for what I said
fourth panel: How about you tell me more about you both?
fifth panel:Really? do you want to hear about all the boring things about us?; okay you can call me that if you like, in fact, I like it.
Beautiful I'm enjoying this so much!!
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Thanks for your help :3
Now the page is fixed XD
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