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Published: 2015-07-28 23:17:10 +0000 UTC; Views: 490; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 0
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First attempt at drawing landscape.Related content
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The environment looks great but it feels too blurry and dark to make out. I get the mountain ridge is blocking part of the sun but I think you could exaggerate the light more. Show the shadow of the mountains across the grass and river. It also looks like you're showing something close to the viewer along the sides of the painting but they're a little vague. If they are closer to the viewer they could be more definite so we notice the difference in distance. I will say I think your composition is great and the gleam in the water looks really natural.
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Yeah I think I could have used more details on the parts near the viewer but I didnt want to draw attention to the sides as the waterfall was supposed to be the main thing. Also I'll try to fix my contrast in future paintings. Thanks a lot!
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