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Shivers96 — Sketches redline?

Published: 2010-06-20 00:24:49 +0000 UTC; Views: 318; Favourites: 3; Downloads: 2
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Description i dont mind crit and maybe redlining would help me with the back legs and maybe paws. im struggling with the big round paws lolol
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Shivers96 [2010-06-20 22:58:51 +0000 UTC]

have a yorkshire pudding

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Shivers96 [2010-06-20 22:58:38 +0000 UTC]

same

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Shivers96 [2010-06-20 22:58:22 +0000 UTC]

LOL I HAVE A JOKE: REDLION
OLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLLOLOLO

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mysdemeanor In reply to Shivers96 [2010-06-22 01:17:32 +0000 UTC]

That took me forever to get.
-sosad-

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Shivers96 In reply to mysdemeanor [2010-06-22 01:22:28 +0000 UTC]

f

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mysdemeanor In reply to Shivers96 [2010-06-22 01:27:18 +0000 UTC]

yes

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Shivers96 In reply to mysdemeanor [2010-06-22 01:31:16 +0000 UTC]

no

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mysdemeanor In reply to Shivers96 [2010-06-22 01:37:21 +0000 UTC]

wry

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Shivers96 In reply to mysdemeanor [2010-06-22 01:41:36 +0000 UTC]

becaus

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mysdemeanor In reply to Shivers96 [2010-06-22 01:43:36 +0000 UTC]

:c

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Shivers96 In reply to mysdemeanor [2010-06-22 01:47:42 +0000 UTC]

:0

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mysdemeanor In reply to Shivers96 [2010-06-22 02:00:50 +0000 UTC]

D:

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Shivers96 In reply to mysdemeanor [2010-06-22 19:47:41 +0000 UTC]

D:I

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mysdemeanor In reply to Shivers96 [2010-06-22 20:03:58 +0000 UTC]

|D

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xRedLily [2010-06-20 17:25:07 +0000 UTC]

Oh wauw! : D really nice! and maybe a bit moar butt? haha

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tWistedscissors [2010-06-20 14:26:21 +0000 UTC]

Also I keep getting sheathed and unsheathed mixed up. I'd say my bad but I doubt you really care.

YOU KNOW WHAT I MEAN

HAVE A POTATO

YOU IRISH BIDDY

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Shivers96 In reply to tWistedscissors [2010-06-20 22:20:24 +0000 UTC]

NO U

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tWistedscissors [2010-06-20 14:24:53 +0000 UTC]

shavs u tit butt

I used this reference for your redline [link]

If in doubt with any sort of anatomy, USE REFERENCES

The first thing I noticed about this is your gait, it's incorrect; animals always walk on alternate legs, it keeps them balanced. I couldn't be bothered redrawing it for you since I've been working all night but the photo is there along with a million others of cats should you need it.

Your hind legs looked a bit broken, for cats the ankle is much lower than that for a dog and they protrude less. The legs should always flow gently as the skin covers most of the muscle definition.

I elongated the body a bit and lowered the head, I'm not too big a quack on animal anatomy but I don't think a cat's head can lift like that in that position in normal stances, it ain't a horse.

Your paws are generally okay I think, just smooth your angles when drawing them. A cat's claws should not be visible unless they're unsheathed, and they're not unsheathed when they're walking. A dog's nails are blunt for they are sheathed constantly, a cat needs them to be sharp and off the ground when not needed.

[link] this is the rough redline I got for you.

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Shivers96 In reply to tWistedscissors [2010-06-20 22:23:06 +0000 UTC]

Thanks jAj this really helped <3
and yeah im trying to get out of my horse+do habits. i reffed this from a random sketch i found on here without lineart to see where circles and main body masses and shit should go. i know may of my poses are 'impossible' poses lol
and now thta i look at it i can clearly see the head is way to far up :C
BUT THATS SOMETHING TO WORK ON !1!!!!1!1!2£$£""£$%^&*(*&^%!^!&*()(*!&^%!!
ilu u wee northern brit

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tWistedscissors In reply to Shivers96 [2010-06-20 22:34:12 +0000 UTC]

Also don't ref from other art, ref from photos :3c

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tWistedscissors In reply to Shivers96 [2010-06-20 22:33:28 +0000 UTC]

have a spud

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