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i dont mind crit and maybe redlining would help me with the back legs and maybe paws. im struggling with the big round paws lololRelated content
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Shivers96 [2010-06-20 22:58:22 +0000 UTC]
LOL I HAVE A JOKE: REDLION
OLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLLOLOLO
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mysdemeanor In reply to Shivers96 [2010-06-22 01:17:32 +0000 UTC]
That took me forever to get.
-sosad-
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xRedLily [2010-06-20 17:25:07 +0000 UTC]
Oh wauw! : D really nice! and maybe a bit moar butt? haha
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tWistedscissors [2010-06-20 14:26:21 +0000 UTC]
Also I keep getting sheathed and unsheathed mixed up. I'd say my bad but I doubt you really care.
YOU KNOW WHAT I MEAN
HAVE A POTATO
YOU IRISH BIDDY
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tWistedscissors [2010-06-20 14:24:53 +0000 UTC]
shavs u tit butt
I used this reference for your redline [link]
If in doubt with any sort of anatomy, USE REFERENCES
The first thing I noticed about this is your gait, it's incorrect; animals always walk on alternate legs, it keeps them balanced. I couldn't be bothered redrawing it for you since I've been working all night but the photo is there along with a million others of cats should you need it.
Your hind legs looked a bit broken, for cats the ankle is much lower than that for a dog and they protrude less. The legs should always flow gently as the skin covers most of the muscle definition.
I elongated the body a bit and lowered the head, I'm not too big a quack on animal anatomy but I don't think a cat's head can lift like that in that position in normal stances, it ain't a horse.
Your paws are generally okay I think, just smooth your angles when drawing them. A cat's claws should not be visible unless they're unsheathed, and they're not unsheathed when they're walking. A dog's nails are blunt for they are sheathed constantly, a cat needs them to be sharp and off the ground when not needed.
[link] this is the rough redline I got for you.
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Shivers96 In reply to tWistedscissors [2010-06-20 22:23:06 +0000 UTC]
Thanks jAj this really helped <3
and yeah im trying to get out of my horse+do habits. i reffed this from a random sketch i found on here without lineart to see where circles and main body masses and shit should go. i know may of my poses are 'impossible' poses lol
and now thta i look at it i can clearly see the head is way to far up :C
BUT THATS SOMETHING TO WORK ON !1!!!!1!1!2£$£""£$%^&*(*&^%!^!&*()(*!&^%!!
ilu u wee northern brit
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tWistedscissors In reply to Shivers96 [2010-06-20 22:34:12 +0000 UTC]
Also don't ref from other art, ref from photos :3c
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