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=READ THE DESCRIPTION AND THEN COMMENT, I DON'T WANT SHORT, ONE-WORD COMMENTS=That entire thing was in caps to get your attention, not that I was mad or anything.
Ugh, not that I didn't enjoy doing this, but FINALLY. I've been working on this project for days....and hours. So this is for 's contest. And I guess it made me make one of the best fan characters I've ever thought of. And for some reason, I feel like winning...must be a gut feeling. So I decided I wanted some extra points and made a little profile of her. Only took 4 hours....guh, I need to get a life. But anyway, I worked really hard on this, and the contest ends on June 1st, and you guys get to vote. I hope you know where this is going. So anyway, for those who like to read a little, read the profile down below.
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Name: Daisy Merksfor
Nicknames: Daise, Omey
Age: 16
Species: Ring-tailed Lemur
Gender: Female
Height: 3' 7''
Weight: 82 pounds
IQ: 96
Marital Status: Echono, boyfriend
DOB: 16/4/3112
Birth Place: South Island
Residence: Stardust Speedway Zone with her parents
Occupation: Professional cook at Merksfor's breakfast lodge
Social Class: Famous cook
Economic Class: upper-middle class
Alignment: Believes in achieving dreams at almost any cost. She's a good guy!
Top Speed: 128 mph
Basic Stats
Agility -/////////
Speed -/////
Strength -/
Defense -///
Evasiveness -////////
Dexterity -//////////
Intelligence -////
Skill -/////
Special Attacks:
(1). Spin Attack
Description: While in locomotion, Daisy can curl down and take on a fetal position, rolling along the ground at a very high speed and rate of torque, meant primarily for breaking through barriers, or destroying enemies.
(2). Spin Jump
Description: Also referred to as the "spinball jump," Daisy is able to leap into the air and curl into a spinning, tightly compacted ball of destruction which can destroy enemies and break barriers.
(3). Spin Dash
Description: Daisy is able to curl down and begin revving up, taking on a diagonally pivoted, ovular shape. Once unleashed, Daisy blasts forward in an acceleration roll of high speed, meant to break barriers or mow down enemies.
Abilities & Aptitude:
(1). Anti-grav
Description: Usually used when cooking, Daisy can lift an object and let it float in mid-air for a limited amount of time, she can control it and can move anywhere she chooses while floating.
(2.) Glare
Description: Daisy can just stare at anyone with her eyes scrunched down making a mad face, scaring them, rendering them helpless to deny any request by her.
Hobbies & Talents:
(1). Has the talent to make omelets that nobody to date has denied.
(2). Overall great cook.
(3). Experienced in a variation of sports such as boarding.
Weaknesses:
(1). Afraid of the dark.
(2). Highly impatient
Personal facts
Friends: Echono Lihte
Rivals: N/A
Enemies: N/A
Known relatives: Andrew Merksfor (father), Lilly Merksfor (Mother)
Likes/Favorite activities: Cooking, breathing, watching others do activities, helping those in need, chilling, and gardening.
Dislikes/Least favorite activities: Having her cooking skills insulted, others denying her requests, others denying her help, and being ignored.
Gourmet of choice: Omelets
Beverages of choice: Soda
Favorite color(s): Purple and Yellow
Personality:
Daisy has a complicated personality, she's one of those who wants to see results. Though she's impatient, it only depends on what it is that she'd be impatient in. Daisy is very persistant in helping those in need, or those she feels is in need. Happy and willing, she would make dinner for anyone that wouldn't want to. She gets offended easily, so she would hint to whoever to say the right things around her. She's not a very strong or physical person.Daisy also looks into what she wears, it's important that she always looks her best. She doesn't have many friends, so she appreciates whoever she meets and treats them well...until about one hour into the friendship. Then, she treats them like she's known them her whole life. Cheery, happy, and optimistic would easily be what describes Daisy best.
She's also left handed.
Physical Appearance
Color: Sky blue
Skin Color: White, fluffy muzzle, chest, and ears.
Eye Color: Yellow
Hair/Quill Style: Three moderetly long, thick, and striped with grey strands of blue hair.
Nose: Small, bulbous black and shiny nose.
Ears: Large, triangular, perked ears
Tail: Large, striped in grey, round edged tail
Other bodily features: Has a large batch of gold hair on her forehead.
Attire:
Dark grey gloves with wholes for each finger, bright grey bands with purple cuffs on her wrists that are just for plain decoration. Crimson ring on her left index finger, crimson arm band on her left arm, and a crimson earring on her left ear. Purple breastplate with yellow streaks on the bottom along with a short, purple and yellow skirt. Same bands on her knees as her wrists with large, purple boots detailed with a thick, white stripe going down the boot to the front, meeting the sole. Along with a strap with small, gold bolts popping out, dark grey soles with yellow circles on the back.
Items & Weapons:
(1).Frying pan
Description: Daisy is usually seen with a frying pan either in the air next to her, or in her hand on an oven. Not brought outdoors.
(2).Hand shovel
Description: Daisy has a small shovel used to dig into the ground to insert Daisies in.
(3).Combat knife
Description: Used for combat, Daisy's moderatly well trained with it.
Vehicles:
N/A (Can't be trusted with a vehicle yet.
Themesong: I dare you to find a good one for her.
Back Story:
Daisy was born a month before Andrew and Lilly planned on moving to the Robotnik-owned Stardust Speedway Zone, they weren't getting enough money in South Island. They also wanted their child to be able to make a living in an urban area. Thus, after Daisy was born, they left South Island, she has never been there since then. When Daisy was younger, around 8-9 years old, she discovered her power to cook. It was breakfast, her parents weren't home, and she was hungry. All Daisy did was grap a frying pan, some eggs, cheese, and in no time at all, she had her first omelet.
Though she didn't finish it, it was placed in the fridge and was later finished by her father, who mistook it for her mother making it. Andrew told and complimented Lilly that it had been the best thing he had ever placed in his mouth, but Lilly denied making it. Since Daisy was an only child, it was obvious that she was the only other one who could make it. That's when the idea struck, their family opened up a resturant, and Daisy gladly accepted to be cook. And to this day, she's been successfully making omelets in the morning until 11:00 PM for the rest of Stardust Speedway.
At this point Daisy is 15 years old, and she's sitting at her window very late at night and notices on the upper levels in the city, not much higher than she is, a race. But this race wasn't normal, she saw two blue streaks dashing across the map with the owner of the city chasing them in a machine puking out a huge laser. This would make anyone curious, but she decided not to do anything about it, she knows Eggman isn't a very cool guy at all. While the next day, a wacky idea occured, and was plastured into Daisy's mind. She wanted to go explore the world, she had never left the huge hustle and bustle of Stardust Speedway. When she mentioned traveling alone, her parents had to go to their own room, and laugh off the idea for an extended amount of time. They later denied her request, in which Daisy did her fist glare....and within the next few hours, and permission from Eggman, Daisy had a backpack, a combat knife, and cooking supplies and was leaving the city.
She didn't have a very distinct idea of where she wanted to go, so she did the most fun and mysterious thing she could, go in a general direction and not stop. The irony of her trip is that it may eventually lead her to South Island, where she was born. But the first destination she did reach was an abandoned city in the dessert, formally known as Tech-City. Before she went into the city, she saw a beautiful orange tree. She gazed at it for what seemed to be hours, and eventually left and went into the city. It was beginning to get dark and Daisy decided to stay inside one of the abandoned buildings for the night. Little did she know that she was going to meet someone who would change her life.....
The end.
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Comments: 37
Patch-the-twin-cat [2008-03-29 18:58:11 +0000 UTC]
Wow,this is something,I mean,I can't use the same program as ur using with all of ur sonic channel artwork,I just simple MS paint for all of mine.
This is fantastic!
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CamoTC [2007-01-15 23:34:37 +0000 UTC]
How did you make the official-looking circle behind her?
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Zazalee--Venix--Zan [2006-05-07 23:42:00 +0000 UTC]
Lovely! ^^ Have you made any tutorials on how to SA style?
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ShockRabbit In reply to Zazalee--Venix--Zan [2006-05-08 03:03:10 +0000 UTC]
No, I havn't. But I might eventually.
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zuniku In reply to ShockRabbit [2006-09-03 17:07:40 +0000 UTC]
Did you use the Profile form from Concept: Mobius for this description?
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ShockRabbit In reply to zuniku [2006-09-03 17:44:06 +0000 UTC]
Yes, I did. Too bad the site's been down for a while.
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zuniku In reply to ShockRabbit [2006-09-03 18:18:09 +0000 UTC]
Yeah, I need to talk to Rob/Tek about that. :/ Dumb bastahd. Anywho, thanks, I was just curious because that's what I was looking for and I remembered that you had an incredibly detailed profile on this deviation and came a snoopin'.
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SarkarDarkstar [2006-04-28 03:53:02 +0000 UTC]
ha cirmson (or dark red) I told you to do it that color and it looks tweet
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CaptRicoSakara [2006-04-23 23:17:48 +0000 UTC]
Awesome job on this! I could color in the offical SA color style as well, but I can't do the lineart right.
Anyways, I like theo utfit on this. The shoes too (I almost mistook them as skates). The colors are flawless!
Great job! You've earn a fav from me on this one!
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RoastMutton [2006-04-22 02:42:33 +0000 UTC]
You did a really good job on this. You are the SA style MASTA. Great profile as well. I'm pretty sure you will win the contest, I hope you do. Sorry that I didn't comment on this earlier, my mind was a complete blank.
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RoastMutton In reply to RoastMutton [2006-04-22 02:43:38 +0000 UTC]
Dammit, double post. Sorry.
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RoastMutton [2006-04-22 02:42:15 +0000 UTC]
You did a really good job on this. You are the SA style MASTA. Great profile as well. I'm pretty sure you will win the contest, I hope you do. Sorry that I didn't comment earlier, my mind was a complete blank.
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Frost123 [2006-04-19 00:03:49 +0000 UTC]
Do they sell extention cords for eyeballs? if they did I would stare at the screen all day long.
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Nianakitten [2006-04-18 01:11:40 +0000 UTC]
Wow, the coloring actually looks like SA style colouring. <333 Very impressive. I like the outfit alot. And you did well on her profile, too. *Too lazy to type anything more* You did great on this, keep it up. =3
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MagnaSwift [2006-04-18 00:43:50 +0000 UTC]
Nice! Very nice! I like the idea of her being a great cook. Characters that are good with food kick arse.
Ring tailed lemur 'eh? Very good, I love those animals, the way they jump and behave and all.
HEY HEY! Anti Grav! WAY COOL!
Very nice design and very nice picture, I love those details and shading. I swear I've seen the pose before though.
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ShockRabbit In reply to MagnaSwift [2006-04-18 01:58:44 +0000 UTC]
That's because the pose is uh...used already. But yeah, thanks for the compliments. I appreciate it!
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dimitridimitri [2006-04-17 21:46:06 +0000 UTC]
Wonderful use of bold foreshortening and strong colours to create a dynamic character drawing that's full of life! Her costume looks awesome and really fits the sense of movement in this piece. Good luck in the contest!!
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KageMaru256 [2006-04-17 20:38:18 +0000 UTC]
Dude that looks so awesome! You are gonna smoke em all!
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CobaltWinterborn [2006-04-17 14:23:39 +0000 UTC]
Oh boy @.@ You and trakker in the same contest, who do I vote for? I vote for the one that stands out to me with good quality overall the entries.
Well I don't know if writing a bio is good or not for the contest entry; do you need to make a profile for her? trakker has an Ice Cat verion and you're is a Lemur.
But overall for your artwork is great ^_^. Well balanced in colour and lighting from overhead.
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Sadechaos454 [2006-04-17 13:53:54 +0000 UTC]
hey do you think you good give me a link to the tutorial you used!! by the way its awesome!!!!!!!!
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Trakker [2006-04-17 12:18:07 +0000 UTC]
well gold saying 'my fav entry' kinda blasts everyone else so far outta the water XD i thought i had a good chance till then. good luck to you, be careful not to be dethrowned by someone even more fabulous ^_^;;
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interfeci [2006-04-17 10:40:29 +0000 UTC]
looks cute and good luck in the contest
and she is a chef? then I love her! I love to cook and so I love this character
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goldhedgehog [2006-04-17 09:03:59 +0000 UTC]
Haha, I love the back story and how it intertwines with Echono's, I must say you're very good at writing
Well, so far. This is my favourite entry I must admit from obvious reasons, I probably shouldn't mention. lol. Ah well, I bid you best of luck in the contest, you're sure to be a crowd favourite.
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chaohelper [2006-04-17 05:25:47 +0000 UTC]
Did it hurt falling from heaven? Best sonic artist eva.
PS: Loooooovve the detail in the shoes.
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BaneTUH [2006-04-17 05:02:18 +0000 UTC]
First off, her IQ is 96, which is nice number to have. However, you made her intelligence a bit low and doesn't seem to reflect that, me thinks: "Intelligence -////"
And make sure the looks match the traits, and vice-versa, as her strength does seem a bit low for some one who shows off her mid-drift and all. I wouldn't worry about this too much if you really want to keep it the same.
She is quite balanced in weakness and strength, so I wouldn't worry about that if I were you.
"Dislikes/Least favorite activities: Having her cooking skills insulted,... others denying her help, and being ignored." Sounds like you could some how make something from that into a weakness, like senstive to how others see her.
"(3).Combat knife
Description: Used for combat, Daisy's moderatly well trained with it." Seems unusual for some one with a lack of strength, who is a cook, and lacks any history of self defense. Usually, a short sword works better for agile, yet weak characters. You might have to fear the whole unoriginality crap if you use that though.
I kinda skimmed the history part, but nothing seems bad there.
Anyway, that is what I thought should be brought to attention. Don't think you should have to change anything, its just my opinion. If you think I am wrong in something I said, do ignore it, unless others speak of it as well.
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goldhedgehog In reply to BaneTUH [2006-04-17 08:46:23 +0000 UTC]
I wouldn't really give out bonus votes on back stories because it doesn't really clash with the characters originality, besides it's less for me to judge for. lol
But on a further note, I would've given out extra points for originality given to the characters created but I'm being lenient, because it's a contest, only. I have an eye for judging Sonic Fancharacters, which is why I offer it as a service to my fellow message boards members.
So to say, it isn't much of a hassle. I know that for the contestants, creating any sort of original character takes longer than what anyone can expect it for. Not that you're stepping towards the wrong direction, you were right to bring an error up.
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BaneTUH In reply to goldhedgehog [2006-04-17 13:55:15 +0000 UTC]
I sorta get you. I may not have a great judging ability, but I can be an extremely harsh critique, the good kind, not the one that goes "this sucks". I can point out the smallest flaws, especially in writing. I don't do much critiquing because I'm either lazy or afraid one my take it too hard.
As for your skill at judging, sadly, I must just believe you. I know my character wouldn't do good though XP Plus, I still have to fix his bio v_v; I got the skills, but I'm also lazy.
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ShockRabbit In reply to BaneTUH [2006-04-17 05:08:32 +0000 UTC]
Thanks, I really appreciate this stuff. It helps me a lot. I'll be sure to fix that soon enough. Thanks for looking through it.
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BaneTUH In reply to ShockRabbit [2006-04-17 05:10:09 +0000 UTC]
You're welcome. I just thought for once I would actually help some one with something rather than saying "That's awesome". And do think about what you are changing and make sure you want to do so.
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ShockRabbit In reply to BaneTUH [2006-04-17 05:13:53 +0000 UTC]
Yeah, I will. It's cool of you to put your time in helping others become better.
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BaneTUH In reply to ShockRabbit [2006-04-17 14:58:29 +0000 UTC]
Eh... I don't do it enough, despite being able to find even the smallest error, flaw, etc. Its a gift, but I tend to waste it XP
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BaneTUH [2006-04-17 04:29:47 +0000 UTC]
*this is totally a one word post D:* Cool.
Actually, I noticed the shoulder was a bit...unusual. It's raised too much. And the finger's on the one hand(her right) seem too long, or else the part between the thumb and the index is not big enough.
And maybe I should go over that profile and see if anything should be noted ._.
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ShockRabbit In reply to BaneTUH [2006-04-17 04:46:03 +0000 UTC]
Yeah, go ahead. I could use some more posts like yours, I only learn from it. Thanks.
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