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Description Done for r/mylittlepony contest.

One of Trixie's escape trick gone awry.

Earlier draft: [link]
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Comments: 35

DoughnutJoe [2013-07-07 15:54:22 +0000 UTC]

Not a problem for the only unicorn powerful enough to vanquish an ursa major.
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Right?
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Trixie?

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shoeunit In reply to DoughnutJoe [2013-07-09 00:37:01 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, this trick should be just mere child's play for anypony able to defeat such beast.

Unfortuately, Trixie haven't fought any bear.

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archiveit1 [2013-04-15 04:24:19 +0000 UTC]

Well, that's pretty dark

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shoeunit In reply to archiveit1 [2013-04-15 20:40:49 +0000 UTC]

I think "intense" might be a better description. Although, this dire situation might go dark.

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broznik592 [2013-04-15 01:06:22 +0000 UTC]

Only a minor setback for one so great and powerful.

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shoeunit In reply to broznik592 [2013-04-15 20:35:02 +0000 UTC]

The Great and Powerful Trixie doesn't need oxygen.

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broznik592 In reply to shoeunit [2013-04-16 00:29:48 +0000 UTC]

She can simply breathe in the glory of her greatness and sustain herself for days!

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Dan001703 [2013-04-14 23:41:48 +0000 UTC]

Crowley, one of our top writers of tasteful smut wrote a story similar to this.

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shoeunit In reply to Dan001703 [2013-04-15 00:22:34 +0000 UTC]

Wut? I assuming that story isn't a smut fic.

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Dan001703 In reply to shoeunit [2013-04-15 01:45:12 +0000 UTC]

"Love-locked and Breathless"

Trixie gets a stage assistant who turns out to be even better than she is at escape artist stunts. She's all tsundere and prideful, so she attempts the water tank escape and almost dies. He heroically rescues her and near-death-experience sex occurs.

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shoeunit In reply to Dan001703 [2013-04-15 20:44:16 +0000 UTC]

Oh, I see. I was confused on how a water torture chamber can possibly be sexual.

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Matt-the-Hydra [2013-04-14 22:58:15 +0000 UTC]

What's the contest theme? Water, escape trick, magic..?

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shoeunit In reply to Matt-the-Hydra [2013-04-15 00:14:57 +0000 UTC]

Theme was simply Trixie. A lot of good Trixie works came out that contest.

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thatlittlecreepypony [2013-04-14 22:57:31 +0000 UTC]

pssh I bet her nostrils are hurting badly

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shoeunit In reply to thatlittlecreepypony [2013-04-15 00:13:04 +0000 UTC]

And her neck is going to be sore in the morning.

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Jon-D4 [2013-04-14 22:41:20 +0000 UTC]

[link]
Or just pick up the chains and straightjacket, if you're Guybrush Threepwood.

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shoeunit In reply to Jon-D4 [2013-04-15 00:08:56 +0000 UTC]

So Trixie should use magic or trickery to escape? Hmm, that could work.

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Onsaud [2012-07-16 18:14:05 +0000 UTC]

Wait... can't she just use, y'know, magic?

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shoeunit In reply to Onsaud [2012-07-16 19:30:35 +0000 UTC]

Realized that while I was drawing this so I came up with a few possible reasons why she can't.

Magic required a lot of concentration for performance. Trixie is too panic at the moment.

Trixie can't quite see the key and levitation involved a strong sense of location of objects.

It's a magicproof key.

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Onsaud In reply to shoeunit [2012-07-16 19:33:08 +0000 UTC]

Pfft. I bet Twilight Sparkle could get out, as she's CLEARLY the superior unicorn.

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shoeunit In reply to Onsaud [2012-07-16 19:46:46 +0000 UTC]

Yeah but Twilight would probably get out using something like science. And I didn't come to a magic show for science.

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Vulpimo [2012-07-08 21:06:04 +0000 UTC]

... what if she doesn't get out?

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shoeunit In reply to Vulpimo [2012-07-08 21:44:43 +0000 UTC]

D:

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Vulpimo In reply to shoeunit [2012-07-09 13:07:39 +0000 UTC]

I mean, she will, won't she?

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shoeunit In reply to Vulpimo [2012-07-09 20:17:32 +0000 UTC]

Not my place to say. What will happen to Trixie in the next 3 minutes is entirely up to your imagination.

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Psycho333 [2012-07-08 11:37:46 +0000 UTC]

Nice work I think Trixie'll get out of this.

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shoeunit In reply to Psycho333 [2012-07-08 19:53:40 +0000 UTC]

Was there ever any doubt?

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NuclearPoweredPony In reply to shoeunit [2013-04-15 05:00:05 +0000 UTC]

Well she does have telekinesis so no.

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Supermeatbrony [2012-07-05 02:36:56 +0000 UTC]

Whoaha this is awesome!

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shoeunit In reply to Supermeatbrony [2012-07-05 08:40:21 +0000 UTC]

Thanks. I'm glad you like it. Guessing you're a big Trixie fan?

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Supermeatbrony In reply to shoeunit [2012-07-05 13:39:57 +0000 UTC]

Pfffft, what gave you that impression...? Hahaha, okay, so yes I do like Trixie quite a bit! But really, I do appreciate what you did here. I don't see a lot of really good suspenseful Trixie pictures like this. I adore the whole magic trick gone wrong theme.

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shoeunit In reply to Supermeatbrony [2012-07-05 20:24:03 +0000 UTC]

I simply got a good intuition of other people's favorite pony. I'm a little ecstatic that you understood the point of this work. I want to capture the tension of a good magic act and figure the best way to do that is to have the magician lose control.

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Supermeatbrony In reply to shoeunit [2012-07-05 22:03:53 +0000 UTC]

Exactly and I completely understood, you conveyed it very well. In fact, consider yourself watched! I'd love to see anything else you manage to think and draw up. Definitely do more like this, I really truly just love it.

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shoeunit In reply to Supermeatbrony [2012-07-05 23:59:56 +0000 UTC]

Aww shucks. Thanks for the watch, hope I don't disappoint you.

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Supermeatbrony In reply to shoeunit [2012-07-06 00:55:19 +0000 UTC]

I very much doubt that you will.

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