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SafariGirl [2004-11-11 02:21:05 +0000 UTC]

I'd crop out part of the top and the space to the right of the pic- it distracts from the beauty-ful subject. on top, i'd crop the middle of the green branch, so theres some green above her head for balance. you know what i mean? the horizontal branch right above her head. Toning down the bright gray rock behind her would work nicely too, and in her shawl. do you know the 'technical' stuff about where to put the subject in a shot? her face would be good to the upper right of the center of the pic. more background should be on the left (trees) than on the right, 'cause that's where she's looking, and you don't want to cut off her range of vision, unless that's the 'mysterious' look that you're going for. (its like when you see a pic of someone walking "right off the page") Other than that, I'd "photoshop" the stray hairs flying off the top of her head- smooth them out some. I like the messy hair on the bottom though. leave that. ...i think that's it

well, that's just what'd I'd do with it. did you catch all that ? love you subject. i'd like to see this one "finished"
~K

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MsJerltheScienceGirl [2004-11-10 19:12:17 +0000 UTC]

This one is really pretty as well-- I like her expression, and the fact that she's not looking at the camera. It has a very romantic sort of feel to it. THere is a little bit of brightness--particularly from the sun and the white on her shawl, that is a little distracting-- I would tone that down a little, and maybe bring out a little bit more of the darkness on the rock, so theres not so much light in the foreground.... other than that, its very very nice! Great model you've got there!

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