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"Torn is the heart of those who don't trust."||BASIC INFORMATION||
Name: Tornkit | Tornpaw | Torn???
Gender: Tomkit
Rank: Kit
Age: 1-6 Moons
D.O.B.: April 10th, 2014
Mentor: N/A
Apprentice: N/A
Clan: Rogue | Pebbleclan | Moonclan
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||PERSONALITY||
{Rude} {Self-Conscious} {Anti-Social} {Sarcastic}
Rude: The first thing any cat will notice about Tornkit is that he's rude. He doesn't go out of his way to please anybody, and isn't afraid to speak his mind. He doesn't care if he hurts anyone's feelings, for he believes that no one cares about his. He's really withdrawn from other's, and tends to be socially awkward when in a group. He has a sharp tongue, and purposely points out the flaws of others.
Self-Conscious: Due to being hairless, Tornkit feel's very self-conscious. He's always worried of what other's think of him and his looks, and it always using his sharp tongue to defend himself. He think's his nakedness, large ears, and unnatural body are all ugly, and nobody can tell him different. His self-conscious tendency leads him to be rude and angry.
Anti-Social: Tornkit is quite awkward in social situations, and tries to avoid them. He doesn't like being looked at, and especially hates being forced to play or interact with other kits. He would much rather hide away and brood.
Sarcastic: For those lucky enough to get on Tornkit's good side, he tends to show his affection with sarcasm. He can still be rude and sadistic, though he tends to back off the angry words a little, and leans more towards his sarcastic tendency's. He's still very much so sarcastic with those he hates as well- and well, everyone else- but he isn't as rude to those he likes.
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||DESCRIPTION||
Breed: 1/2 Sphinx 1/2 Donskoy
Pelt: Being hairless, Tornkit doesn't have a pelt. Though his skin is a blueish grey color, mimicking that of his father, who was a Donskoy (a breed of single colored hairless cats).
Body: Like both of his parents, Tornkit has wrinkled skin. Though his genetics take after his mother more-so with the smoother complexion, and softer skin. He has a deep tear down his left ear, though he doesn't remember how he got it.
Face: Like the Sphinx, Tornkit has a narrow muzzle, with large eyes, and large ears. His nose and inner ears are an off tannish-pink color. Even when he's not, he generally looks like he's frowning.
Pawpads: Tornkit's pawpads are the same color as his nose and inner ears. They're quite sensitive to temperature, and different ground types.
Scars: As of now, Tornkit has no real scars, other than the tear in his ear.
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||STATS||
Out of 5 *****
Power: *** Tornkit is still young and small, so he's not very powerful.
Speed: ** Due to being sensitive to his surroundings, and whatever goes underfoot, Tornkit isn't very fast.
Grace: *** Tornkit isn't very graceful, though he doesn't trip over his own two feet all that often either.
Endurance: *** Running and playing isn't Tornkit's strong suit. As he grow's older, he may gain more endurance while training.
Accuracy: **** The one thing Tornkit is good at, is pouncing. He always hits his mark. And even when he doesn't, he get's real close.
Tactics: *** If he broods long enough, Tornkit could come up with decent strategy's.
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||STRENGTHS AND WEAKNESSES||
*WIP*
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||HISTORY||
Kithood:
Tornkit was born as a rogue, with a Sphinx mother and Donskoy father. He was given the name Blue, after his blue colored skin. They lived with a decent sized band of rogues who made their home on the outskirts of Pebbleclan. When he was very little still, his rogue family attacked Pebbleclan, resulting in the death of his father, and capture of his mother and himself. Once becoming apart of Pebbleclan, his name was changed to Tornkit, for he had a large tear in the middle of his left ear.
At one moon old, Moonclan attacked Pebbleclan. During the battle, Tornkit got separated from his mother, who ran back towards the outskirts of Skyclan. Fearful and lost, Tornkit tried to run after her, but to his dismay, was abandoned by her. He somehow ended up in the middle of the group of cat's who had been taken hostage, and was herded back to Moonclan's camp with them. Once there, he hid in the far back of the medicine cat den, where Breezemoon found him. After being swatted and hissed at, Breezemoon fetched for Timidbreeze- a kind queen who could probably calm the kit down. Timidbreeze picked Tornkit up by the back of his neck, and carried him back to her nest in the nursery, where she introduced him to his new family.
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||RELATIONSHIPS||
Mates:
~Crush: N/A
Kits:
~First Litter: N/A
Parents:
~Birth Mother: Lilly
~Birth Father: Rat
~Adoptive Mother: Timidbreeze
~Adoptive Father: Fallenstar
Siblings:
~Birth Siblings: N/A
~Adoptive Siblings: Cottenkit, Dandelionkit, Milkkit, Vixenkit, Morningkit
Grandparents:
~Adoptive Grandfathers: Bravenight, Deathsong
~Adoptive Grandmothers: Softclaw, Icebreath
Other Family:
~N/A
||RELATIONS||
- Moonclan Cat
- Nursery
- Family
- Friend
- Best Friend
- Crush
- Mate
- Rival/Feared
- Greatly feared/Enemy
- Stranger/Unknown
- Other Clan Cat
Strikeout - DeceasedMOONCLAN
.:Clan Cats:.Spiceshadow: Tornkit doesn't know who he is, nor does he care.
Breezemoon: From the start, Tornkit hasn't liked Breezemoon. He doesn't think he ever will.
.:Friends:.
Tornkit doesn't have any friends yet!
.:Family:.Timidbreeze: Timidbreeze adopted Tornkit as her own, and is trying to take care of him- though he resents it. He finds her to be too motherly and kind- and think's its annoying. Or, at least that's what he says out loud. He secretly hopes to never lose her, like he did his own mother- but he wouldn't tell anybody that.
Fallenstar: Tornkit doesn't like Fallenstar. Not only did he destroy what life he had, but he made his mother run away, and took his only home away. Fallenstar may be Timidbreeze's mate, but that does NOT make him Tornkit's father!
Morningkit: Vixenkit call's her "Momo," though Tornkit prefers to call her "annoying." He thinks she's trying too hard to be his friend, and it irritates him. He'd rather be eaten by a fox than have to listen to her blabber on all day.
Vixenkit: Vixy? Oh yeah, Morningkit's twin. Tornkit doesn't know her very well, and doesn't care to get to know her. She seems to be leaving him alone, and he's just fine with that.
Cottonkit: Tornkit finds "that stupid sleepy brain" to be, well, just that. He thinks she's annoying, and doesn't like finding her sleeping all the time. Oh well. At least she can't bother him if she's sleeping.
Milkkit: What's her problem? Tornkit could see right off the bat that Milkkit thinks everyone hates her. Good. Because he does.
Dandelionkit: Eh.
.eceased:.
N/A
DAWNCLAN
N/A
PEBBLECLANLilly: Later renamed Lillypelt, Lilly was once a rogue, and is Tornkit's mother. During the Pebbleclan raid, she ran away, abandoning him. He both hates and loves her, wondering if she left him on purpose, or if it was just an accident. He sometimes wishes she would come back to find him one day- but doubt's it'll ever happen. Besides, she might be dead.
SNOWCLAN
N/A
FIRECLAN
N/A
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||TRIVIA||
* Tornkit's design was created by TimidCute
* Tornkit was originally supposed to be a British short hair, who lost all his hair in a Pesticide accident- but due to some issues with the story, he was changed to be just a hairless cat.
* Tornkit doesn't know how his ear was ripped the way it is, but what happened was his mother was carrying him trough some brush when he was little, and his ear got caught on a sharp branch. It ripped into his ear, causing the large tear.
* Tornkit's mother actually abandoned him, for she was too cowardly to go back into the nursery and look for him. She ran towards Skyclan, where her story ends.
* Tornkit is my first character.
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Art: TimidCute
Tornkit: Shorn-and-Shattered
The-Warriors-Guild
PLEASE DO NOT STEAL. THANK YOU.
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Heh, I actually didn't put this whole thing together. My wonderful girlfriend, TimidCute did this for me. She based it off of her own character's applications, so it looks more organized. This is my first time roleplaying in a group like this, so bare with me if I seem to be confused.
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Comments: 19
Shorn-and-Shattered In reply to TimidCute [2014-05-25 16:25:45 +0000 UTC]
I'd be fine with that~
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TimidCute In reply to Shorn-and-Shattered [2014-05-27 15:40:01 +0000 UTC]
Hehe, okay~
Morningkit bounded into the nursery, a small ball of moss in her mouth. She had a little trouble climbing over the nest wall, but once inside her nest, she giggled and dropped the moss ball. Her bright green eyes settled on Tornkit, and her mouth curled into a mischievous grin, "Tornkit! Do you wanna play a game with me? All you do is lay around- it's time to play!"
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Shorn-and-Shattered In reply to TimidCute [2014-06-05 15:30:54 +0000 UTC]
With a small huff, the hairless kit turned his head towards her and layed his ears back. His small face portrayed extreme contempt as he growled a bit.
"I told you before, I WON'T play with you. Leave me alone, hairball." He turns his head back to curl back down to the nest and tightens up his hairless form into a tighter ball.
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Tomoelu [2014-05-13 01:10:34 +0000 UTC]
Welcome to the Guild and MoonClan! I play Spiceshadow, the deputy; Jadesnow, a nursery queen; Scorpionpaw, the son of the former leader; and Sleetkit, Jadesnow's daughter. If you need anything, feel free to ask! That's what we deputies are here for~
It's wonderful to meet you and we are glad to have you as MoonClan's newest member! I hope you enjoy your time in the group and make friends here. We are all family here and we welcome you with open arms :3
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Shorn-and-Shattered In reply to Tomoelu [2014-05-13 19:59:16 +0000 UTC]
Well thank-you!~ I hope to enjoy it here and make a whole buncha friends! I suppose you already know who I will be playing, right?
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Tomoelu In reply to Shorn-and-Shattered [2014-05-13 20:46:34 +0000 UTC]
Yep :3 I can't wait too see you get started and I hope you enjoy yourself~
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Nugchuppy [2014-05-13 00:44:16 +0000 UTC]
Oh dear he looks like a cutie, Timid did a great job on the app and things
Welcome to the group anyways
I RP Cottonkit, one of his adopted sisters aha one of 5
If you're ever interested in a RP I'd enjoy doing one
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Shorn-and-Shattered In reply to Nugchuppy [2014-05-13 20:00:37 +0000 UTC]
Heh, thank-you~ He's probably going to come off as mean and standoffish, but I do need to practice roleplaying with him. I suppose a sister should be my first choice for a roleplay?
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PatchyFallenstar [2014-05-10 07:08:16 +0000 UTC]
Alrighty! Thanks for changing his design to be a bit more normal. He's accepted into the Guild and you are all set up and ready to dive right in! Let me know if there's anything I can help you with, or Timid can help ya
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Shorn-and-Shattered In reply to PatchyFallenstar [2014-05-10 18:36:18 +0000 UTC]
I'm not really sure how acepting assignments works actually.
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PatchyFallenstar In reply to Shorn-and-Shattered [2014-05-12 07:53:06 +0000 UTC]
So when we create assignments; well, it kind of depends on the kind of assignment -- some are sign up but for the most part we'll give you a role to do and you get to draw or write or whatever medium you want to depict your characters fulfilling their assigned duty. you submit it to the guild (most of them will go into the MoonClan folder, for future reference) and if you get it done before the due date you pass
If you're late you'll get a penalty, where you may lose characters if you rack up too many penalties in a row (ie: they'll get sick, but if you dont depict them getting better they'll die) and if you don't do it at all (or dont sign up) you get a strike. it's kind of like a 3-strikes-you're-out kind of deal.
Does that help explain it a bit more? I can try and explain it in a less confusing manner heehee
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Shorn-and-Shattered In reply to PatchyFallenstar [2014-05-13 19:56:58 +0000 UTC]
No, this makes perfect sense. :3 When will be my first assignment?
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PatchyFallenstar In reply to Shorn-and-Shattered [2014-05-13 23:11:14 +0000 UTC]
Well right now all of the warriors are kind of having assignments til the end of the month, so it probably won't be until June. In the meantime though, if you want, feel free to get to know your Clanmates -- you can have Tornkit poke around the Nursery and introduce him to the other kits
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Shorn-and-Shattered In reply to PatchyFallenstar [2014-05-15 20:09:45 +0000 UTC]
So, how do I go about roleplays with clanmates? Do I just note them to get one going?
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PatchyFallenstar In reply to Shorn-and-Shattered [2014-05-16 05:53:30 +0000 UTC]
You can do notes, or you can scour through their character sheets and roleplay in the comments, however you prefer
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TimidCute [2014-05-09 18:32:25 +0000 UTC]
Hehe, look at that baby ;u; He's so cute- and the art is amazing
But seriously, I can't wait until you start roleplaying with him <33
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