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Published: 2006-12-08 11:32:20 +0000 UTC; Views: 2029; Favourites: 27; Downloads: 38
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I was planning on toning this page and posting all pretty and toned and such, but its taking me a thousand years for some reason.Theres that funny little balance with tones. You either over do them or there aren't enough... I'm having trouble finding that balance
ps - Space Marines are terribly crucial
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LEVELED UP!
Seriously, you're improving so quickly its insane.
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Damn it girl. Awesome panels, awesome page. Not to mention you too the characters from shallow and vaguely relate-withable to likable in one page.
Can't wait to see it all.
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haha this is great, i'd go with her suggestion.
a great page
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you've been improving so much!! This looks great!
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Your sense of composition is admirably enviable. Panels 2 and 4 = Victory.
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I like this lady ^_^
She has a hidden 'class' that i happen to enjoy XD
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I met a Space Marine once. His name was Theopholous. I used to call him a geek. He'd laugh and then he'd go save the WORLD.
It was cool.
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Space Marines - 100% entertainment for void 100% of the time.
as usual - thsi is awsome.
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that's gotta be the best girlfriend in the whole world
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I'm really having trouble with tones too. I thought it would be easy. Discuss.
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I'm loving the 4th panel. Your backgrounds are awesome.
It's almost always better to undertone than overtone. Too much tone looks muddy, but too much white space usually looks all right.
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SPACE MARINES !!!!! haha
your panel structure and inking in this are ofcourse always grand, i love the emotions youve put into the characters, thats something i need to work on terribly haha
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ALL SPACE MARINES ALL THE TIME
YOU STILL SYNCHRONIZE YOUR CLOCKS TO THE SUN ?
OURS RUN OFF THE HALF LIVES OF OUR OXYGEN SUPPLY
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I simply love your clean inks and your backgrounds.
Your paneling is also something i can't get
enough of.
Third panel is killer!
the ways she grabs his scarf in the last panel is a nice subtle hint at what she really wants.
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god, you're a great storyteller. this series easily contains the best sequential pages on deviantart!!! I can't wait for the next installment!!!
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woo shes a babe in the 6th panel <3 all and all shes a hot chicka
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