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The wing going around her is incorrect (bad placement) but other than that I'm happy with this final page. xD
Also I didn't mention this before, but I will now: I didn't put their names on their earrings because I didn't want my classmates questioning it. Pierce's name was never mentioned in this comic, so I didn't want them to ask who Pierce was. lol
Like I mentioned in a journal, too, Rose does not fully listen to Pierce. She's just saying she'll stop so he'll quit yelling at her. She doesn't really believe what he's saying is how he actually feels either...
So again, like I said before, this will get a second and third part later. The second part may just be a two frame comic from how I am seeing it. WE SHALL SEE.
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THIS COMIC IS CUTE AS FUQ. Pierce is the cutest FA <3
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YEEE <3 I wanna do more comics. SO MANY IDEAS.
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wow amazing show of affection i love how he just wrapped her up to keep her from fighting back
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That was incredibly sweet, oh my goodness. I love how cute they appear in this comic, you did an awesome job!~
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I love how you resolved this. Β Nicely done. Β I think you have explored some interesting issues here, and some which disturb couples in real life. Β Thanks for being so good at this.
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And thank you for your lovely comments~
For the next part I want to show, I just have a feeling people will start thinking differently of Pierce because he'll suddenly seem like a rude/mean guy.
Then the third part should resolve it, I hope.
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it's nice to see your characters interact in a comic like this (:
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I wanna do a lot more like this.
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I'm glad you portray Rose like an actual female girl... A lot of the time we WILL say stuff we know our guys want to hear, just to get them off our backs, as well as not believe what they did is the truth (do to low self-esteem or other personal issues).
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Characters I can relate to are just best for me in the end.
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Ah, if all humans (and youkais) thinking like Pierce... our world would have less problems!
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That was a really sweet comic. Nicely done
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That was really cute 
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AWW!!!! Pierce be maken all the men jelly!! >w<
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They'd think that Rose is crazy. lol
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psh!!! they be cray cray!!! Pierce is like the dream man!!
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awww...my heart died *w*
I can understand Rose: even if Pierce's feelings are true, she can't accept her...
I think a lot of people could understand her.
very beautiful
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you should draw a coloured pic of them kissing!!! Β That would be wonderfulΒ Β
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AWWWWWWW this is a perfect comic! <3 well done
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squeeeee~~~~~~ this is just so cute~~~~~<3 >w<Β
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Awwwwww, the last panel is too cute X3
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