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What you say? I feel Oil and graphite is not a good combination for photograph results. The blacks are not deep enough in the painting/drawing. The photo is taken with a phone which could not capture the work properly. Anyways. Please feel free to comment/critique about this study i did.Related content
Comments: 22
Giselle-M [2013-03-02 13:32:22 +0000 UTC]
Nicely done, I enjoyed the time lapse video of it too.
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wickedphoenix93 [2013-02-26 18:33:55 +0000 UTC]
ohgosh I love this!! the only thing I might suggest is thickening the lower lip just a bit, toward the left-hand side, but this is still phenomenal!!!
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Eleanascarfy [2013-02-24 16:15:25 +0000 UTC]
Looks fantastic spot on actually
The lips are the only thing I would change...everything else looks amaaaazing!
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rachaelnicole08 [2013-02-22 14:06:54 +0000 UTC]
Here are the positive things about this:
1. Overall, her facial structure is on point. Her jawline looks good, and her ears look great.
2. The eyes are dang close. I understand the coloring throws it off, so I am going on shape, and you did a great job!
3. The hair looks fantastic! Again, I understand your frustration with the coloring, but the textures look great!
4. Her nose shape is correct, though the coloring problems you had didn't allow you to contour as thoroughly.
I think you did well, but there are some things you could work on that aren't related to the materials:
1. The lip is uneven on the bottom, as if she is biting it. The top lip isn't as full as Emma's but it's pretty close. This causes the chin to look too big despite the fact that it is the correct size.
2. The eyebrows need to be fuller. Emma is known for her youthful unarched and full eyebrows. This throws off the shape of her eyes, which are done well.
3. Her second most popular trait is her freckles, which bring out her French background. They are missing, but that could be from the materials you used. It's a lot easier to make freckles with other drawing materials.
Overall, it looks great, but it's the small details in Emma face that make it look like a girl who looks like her, and not actually her.
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shosansharma In reply to rachaelnicole08 [2013-02-22 14:16:55 +0000 UTC]
Can't thank you enough for such a thorough and quick commenting. You are so generous about the positive notes, i thank you for that. It means a lot. About the shortcomings - spot on mam, it means even more. A different perspective is so so helpful. Thank you so much from depth of my heart. Please keep visiting...
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rachaelnicole08 In reply to shosansharma [2013-02-22 14:21:28 +0000 UTC]
Oh no problem! I am a big fan of Emma Watson's lol so I know a little more about her than I should, but hey if it helps an artist, then I am glad to help!
I really think you have talent! I suck at drawing real life, and mainly stick to animation, but I am pretty good at critiques. At least I have been told
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shosansharma In reply to rachaelnicole08 [2013-02-22 14:29:11 +0000 UTC]
You are pretty good at critiques, people are so right! Please feel free to run other works in my gallery through your quality scanner, that would be a great help. You are an awesome person
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rachaelnicole08 In reply to shosansharma [2013-02-22 14:33:56 +0000 UTC]
I will definitely be following you now!
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shosansharma In reply to rachaelnicole08 [2013-02-23 13:03:47 +0000 UTC]
Thank you so much!
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shosansharma In reply to twinxlill [2013-02-22 14:17:49 +0000 UTC]
Oh so sweet of you, thank you so much
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berry2378 [2013-02-22 13:55:15 +0000 UTC]
Wow, this is great!
You really got the reflections right :3
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shosansharma In reply to berry2378 [2013-02-22 14:18:24 +0000 UTC]
Thanks you so much. Much appreciated.
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