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Shoujo-Jojo — Harmony color concept (feedback needed!)
Published: 2013-05-10 00:30:09 +0000 UTC; Views: 2236; Favourites: 9; Downloads: 0
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*REMINDER* This Character is now under Copyright. ©As some of you have seen this OC on my page as a new character for the new story that I'm pushing to Hasbro, I mentioned that I was now on a color palette for her, since Queen Elysia is now finished, and Lady Sin is being finalized...
I SERIOUSLY need feedback on this color scheme: Questions, comments, suggestions, etc.
EXAMPLE: Please look at her right legs - I used 2 different colors for the strokes. Let me know which one you think fits her palette better.
I am in need of a great MLP vector artist to do the vectoring for this OC once the final color palette is decided. I have no vectoring skills at all, nor do I even have Illustrator or even a tablet to start learning. The artist I select to do the vectoring will receive due credit towards the final design upon submission to Hasbro.
If you're interested in doing the vectoring, please send me a note.
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That's a nice art! I'm just wondering, what you used?
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Her color scheme actually isn't all that bad. However, her cutiemark is a bit over-played and overly complicated.
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Well, Without revealing too much about this character, due to my plans for her...I can tell you that yes, that cutie mark is kind of a place filler at the moment, but it does suit her since she IS the creator of the Elements of Harmony, hence her name...
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In that case, she shouldn't really be an OC. After all, nobody ever wants there character too appear overpowered.
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Ah, but see that's the idea - there's a reason she has to be a bit overpowered here...
Go to my page and look at the image(s) of Lady Sin, the prime antagonist. I really cant reveal anymore other than that both these ponies, Sin and Harmony, are the SAME PONY.
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I still don't think you should make her so powerful. Even with my alicorn OC, she has faults. And, as is, two personalities do not count as faults.
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Oh, she has faults, lol. If she didn't, she wouldn't have made the choices that caused her to fall into darkness. This OC is meant to be a prime example that even the purest heart can turn to evil.
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Hmm, I'll give you a couple quizzes, since I can't entirely tell. Don't take them to heart though if you end up being a "yes", just work on the charrie a bit and she'll be fine.
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I suggest trying all of them, but if you can't, then USE THE LAST ONE. It's the best of the three.
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Answer to Test 1 = Not a Mary Sue (75% pure)
Answer to Test 2 = Not a Mary Sue
Answer to Test 3 = Coming soon (Good lord, got enough questions in this quiz?)
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The first two aren't entirely....accurate. I would've given you a different one, but I can't seem to find it....heh.
And besides, these aren't 100% accurate. A mary sue isn't necessarily a "perfect character", it's any character that is a cliche. It's kinda difficult to not make a mary sue, but it's very easy to make it not-blatantly-obvious. I still think you should do some more developing with your OC, but it's your character, so it's entirely up to you.
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