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Published: 2005-03-28 02:25:22 +0000 UTC; Views: 10037; Favourites: 216; Downloads: 1619
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I know I haven't done one of these in a very long time, so here you are.for the beautiful piece in the corner.
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Good plan 
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Amazing stuff. Well written, and a killer setup.
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This brought me to tears. I have been married a VERY long time to the love of my life and this is what we have. Just made me appreciate him all over again. 
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one of my favorites though...
I've got worse
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Beautiful....absolutely beautiful.
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oh my gosh
i freakin love this
this is amazing
best ive seen ever
you are amazing
keep going
wow is all i can say - i need to order a print for my bf haha
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that is really really good..... i love how it all flowed and it can mean something to everyone as an individual but can also mean something to everyone in general. amazing piece of work!!!!
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I try to make it so everyone can at least think of someone...
or maybe a situation in their life that this poem relates to.
thank you for the
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This actually made me cry. It is very beautiful, and powerful.
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oh wow!!
this is so beautiful, i'm gonna fav it!!!
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wow, had a happy/sad sigh after reading this.. it's amazing that it's the little things like that that can spark love
+fav
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I think if I found this I'd be happy forever.
I love it. Good job.
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that was such a sweet comment.. thank you
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I'm excited to be your first 
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the one I am very very close to showed me this, and I must say it is very very beautiful indeed. We spent a bit of time speaking about it and it's meaning...thank you
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This is one of the most beautiful things I have read.
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Gah! This just made me burst out in tears! I never knew that that feeling could be put into words... thankyou.
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there's a certain someone that can make me write like that...
if you want, check out [link] & [link]
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This is just so beautiful... I'm sure you hear this all the time, but I can relate to everything you say here. It's amazing how well you put feelings into words.
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It's always a pleasure to hear that from anyone.
thank you
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Seeing this has made me very happy.
Your words are Beautiful and Real and anybody who has felt Real Love will be able to connect with them.
Not only have you made me think a lot about what I want in my relationship with my boyfriend, but you have also made me think about what he may want.
Wonderful work.
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this is beautiful, very emotional, deeply touches the heart :fav:
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this is beautiful, this has to be beautiful. Poetry is generally wasted on me, especially if it's me reading it, generally I just don't get it. But this really touches me. Wonderful job. more like this please
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So nice and yet so simple... I like this one not only for what it says but also how it is said... I also really like the typo you used and the overall layout of the piece.... I agree with Dholms on that last line it is really intimate as it implies a lot more than what it literally says... I really enjoyed this piece! nice work!
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thank you for the support and
I have another one almost ready to submit...
entitled... "all her dreams"
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looking forward to reading it!
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i want you
to want me
as much
as i
want you
*shrug*
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loved it and identifyed with it!
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it's always the smallest things that make it love...
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It's so touching, adorable, and lovely. its very beautiful
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Honest and beautiful... amazing depiction of love.
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.. outstanding...
that is one of the most emotional things i have seen in a looong time...
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[link] did you read that one
Thanks for checking my stuff out.
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you are welcome, its incredible..
:]
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This piece is amazing, S.
And had to make his kickass contribution, eh?
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my goodness this is amazing, i really appreciate this. You have a gift. I wish i had someone to have this for...
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[link] did you read that one?
thanks for taking a look
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omg.
doing laundry together.
that's the best!!! especially the spin cycle. mmmmmmmmm. spin cycle rules!!! it rules i tell you!!!! it rules!!!!
uhm,...
ok,...moving on,...
'patience',...
you can't say enough about that. patience is key. i certainly identify with that one girl.
patience is a lost art. and it's ironic really,...because it's so applicable with respect to
ALL aspects of life,...the least of which is NOT love. love takes a patient heart. takes a patient soul. no doubt.
yeah. we're all teachers.
but more importantly,...
we're all students.
the question is though,...
will you decide to learn?
actually, i've always thought you should GIVE more than you TAKE.
but that's just me.
'memorize how it falls around my neck'
that's beautiful shanna.
so beautifully intimate.
ok. i'm getting all romantical stupid now.
pft!! thanks alot!!
seriously.
thanks.
alot.
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