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Published: 2005-03-28 02:25:22 +0000 UTC; Views: 10037; Favourites: 216; Downloads: 1619
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I know I haven't done one of these in a very long time, so here you are.for the beautiful piece in the corner.
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When I wrote this I think I was in the process of realizing how many relationships end because of little things that pass under the radar at first glance.
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Really...amazing. All of the visual poetry I've read on your account is really something I..and tons of other people, I'm sure...can relate to. Great work.
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I just thank you all for taking the time to read them in the first place
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Beautiful!! and so truee! God I want that.. haha I love this.
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it made me all warm and bubbly inside..and reminded me aof a certain someone...thanks.
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you should def. do more of these. It's my desktop on my comp. now; I love it!
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there's more visual poetry pieces in my gallery than any other category....
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...the truth in every hesitant first shy glances
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that's so beautiful... and... i feel that this are the things i want right now 
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I cried when I read this. My boyfriend used to make me feel that way, but somehow these days, I feel like I'm yearning so what he used to give. I somehow feel like he doesn't love me as much as before, and it breaks my heart really badly...
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Beautifull piece ... says a lot about a relationship and what a person wants in a relationship... you have written something i think everyone in the world no matter their background or nationality can relate to... thank you
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I absolutely adored the first lines and the amazing image of the last two...
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my personal favorite is the one about doing laundry together...
thank you
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This is really emotional and great! Such a wonderful piece.
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I just happened across this and I had to tell you how much I love it.
It is very beautiful and very true...... you have a gift.
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This is incredibly beautiful. I'm head over heels in love right now, and this just sings to me. It's everything I want from him, and it's amazing to see the confusing feelings I have right now put down in words. It's so eloquent, I love it.
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The laundry thing usually gets to people 
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as always you simply amazes me with your poems and yes its been a long time sinc eyou have done something like this
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thanks for checking out my stuff
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My pleasure, I absolutely love this piece. Me and my girlfriends love it.
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Wow...
Without a doubt, this is one of the best poems that I've ever read; for once, I feel like I have nothing to say.
(Coming from someone like me, by the way, that's a pretty big compliment.)
If I could 'fave it multiple times, I would.
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I'll take the favorites comment as a compliment
thank you.
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I like that.
...when I first started reading it, I thought: What does that remind me of?! It got some song stuck in my head and I didn't know what it was... then I realized it was Somebody by Depeche Mode
Yep. But good stuff.
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Your comment sparked my curiousity enough to make me go download that song
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wonderful piece.
i love pieces like this, its something that everyone can relate too.
great work.
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and I'm glad people can recognize that- thank you.
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Oh, that is so very true! It's amazing how so many can feel like that, but you truly have the talent to put those feelings into words. As if that wasn't enough, the love that nobody can understand makes sense...
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it's too bad most of my pieces are angry
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one of the most emotional things i've ever read. *tears*
thank you so much for sharing this wonderful piece of art with us.
this would make a really nice print.
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I'm glad people can relate
you can buy prints if you want.
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when i havee some money i'm sure i will.
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Wow... you are far more articulate than me.
I love this, your words are so honest.
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just write about something you're passionate about...
and go with it.
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