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Taking into account some of the things some people have suggested, I erased some of the lineart so the shoulder didn't look 'detachable' xD but also...the really thick lineart wasn't working for the background anyway.
for lighting purposes, it was better to blend the lineart with the light :/ AND I lengthened the arm...and I made his ass smaller, as well as making his thigh slightly thinner. I was considering scaling the chest as well, but I wasn't sure how to go about it...I mean, I would have to fix up the lineart that would be affected so, I'm just gonna leave his chest be. I think I've worked way too much on the skin already, but I still think it's not dark enough in certain areas....it needs to match the tone of his shadow....Oh well, I'm kinda happy with it at this point though.

Thanks for your time.

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it's probably not smart to do something else when you have an assignment due in 2 days, but, I woulda died of frustration so I had to do something else...as usual.

I was skimming through the countless comic ideas I write down in my countless notebooks for a specific script I wrote...it's short and it's about how Vergil felt about his Mother Eva.
I won't say anymore because I'll just spoil it...such as this wip LOL.
Where is Vergil? Why is he hurt? He will explain it in this introduction page; Prologue. whatever they're called.

Btw, the shiney things in the window are stars, incase you couldn't tell xD
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Comments: 39

donizu [2011-09-17 17:41:01 +0000 UTC]

You have so many unfinished pics. I wish you would finish this one plz. It looks really good!

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Silent-Neutral In reply to donizu [2011-09-18 08:46:57 +0000 UTC]

I did finish this one xD it's a comic though, which ISN'T finished lol. It's in my DMC folder, you'll see it..

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WJ2050 [2010-07-06 20:30:03 +0000 UTC]

This is really nice done. Vergil looks like he's thinking about everything what he has done wrong in his life. and one of those things is...why did I stop drawing DMC and digital art hehehe . The coloring, shadows and atmosphere in this pic are really good.

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Silent-Neutral In reply to WJ2050 [2010-07-07 06:59:19 +0000 UTC]

thankyou!
ha...well he's sorta dwelling on the past, to put it simply.

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BananawaniTaira [2010-05-19 04:32:45 +0000 UTC]

Aww... *gives Ver a hug*

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Silent-Neutral In reply to BananawaniTaira [2010-05-23 11:04:57 +0000 UTC]

V: oow ow...My side...

xB No you're right, he does need a hug, and he gets it later on too! rofl.

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BananawaniTaira In reply to Silent-Neutral [2010-05-23 11:53:06 +0000 UTC]

Shaddup and be a man... err... demon.

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Silent-Neutral In reply to BananawaniTaira [2010-05-23 13:09:19 +0000 UTC]

V: >_>...If only you knew how much it hurts...-reaching for Yamato...-
S-N: No Vergil, be nice. a hug is a GOOD thing...not that I'm expecting you to realize that -_-

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BananawaniTaira In reply to Silent-Neutral [2010-05-23 13:13:41 +0000 UTC]

IHD: *insert puppydog face*
V: *twitch*

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Silent-Neutral In reply to BananawaniTaira [2010-05-23 14:45:03 +0000 UTC]

V: It's Dante all over again...

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BananawaniTaira In reply to Silent-Neutral [2010-05-23 14:46:57 +0000 UTC]

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Midnight-Somnus [2010-04-29 17:59:44 +0000 UTC]

I am intrigued by this comic idea.

Can't wait to see the rest.

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Silent-Neutral In reply to Midnight-Somnus [2010-04-30 11:27:57 +0000 UTC]

Thankyou for your interest

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NotAnotherZeroFan [2010-04-29 17:32:25 +0000 UTC]

I meant to comment on this too...

...But I got blocked due to sever maintenence... ¬_¬...

...Man, I take too long to comment sometimes... -_-;

Here's what I would've said last night:

While I like the color job on this so far, there's something bugging me about the anatomy...

...Basically, his upper torso looks a bit too thick...

...I dunno, I'm not an expert on human anatomy...

There's also something nagging me about the arm (besides what was mentioned in another comment), but I dunno if it's just me...

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Silent-Neutral In reply to NotAnotherZeroFan [2010-04-30 11:27:25 +0000 UTC]

Hmm...I never considered that. Thankyou for pointing that out to me, I guess it does seem kinda thick..but to balance the size of the head, I usually draw chests like that in profiles If It's not too much hassle, I might...thin the bosy. and Yes, the arm was weird, But I've fixed that now. Hopefully it looks better.

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NotAnotherZeroFan In reply to Silent-Neutral [2010-05-01 02:19:20 +0000 UTC]

No problem.

If it make you feel better, I have proportion problems all the time.

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kyotoxo1 [2010-04-29 12:47:53 +0000 UTC]

OMFG LOVE IT!!! *_* Damn, I envy your DMC drawing skillz!

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Silent-Neutral In reply to kyotoxo1 [2010-04-29 14:47:34 +0000 UTC]

thankyou ;_; hahaaa x'D If I had of pencil drawn this, it would have came out worse. Hurrah for digital editing >_<

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kyotoxo1 In reply to Silent-Neutral [2010-04-29 14:54:28 +0000 UTC]

lucky for digital editing! XD I have nothing!

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Silent-Neutral In reply to kyotoxo1 [2010-04-29 15:12:16 +0000 UTC]

aww...that used to be me too D: I hope you can get it back again!

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kyotoxo1 In reply to Silent-Neutral [2010-04-29 17:54:27 +0000 UTC]

I do all my digital by mouse

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fullcreamilk [2010-04-28 23:22:20 +0000 UTC]

OMFGGGGG THAT COLOURING = WOW
undfndfdf. is it all on one layer? cos that shit is harrdd to do. but i do it anyway to torture myself
fndkfe arghhg gf look at your composition skills man THEY BRILLIANT
oh and that hair <3

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Silent-Neutral In reply to fullcreamilk [2010-04-29 10:32:14 +0000 UTC]

thankyou <3
nahh there's quite a few. about 3 shade layers for the skin, another 3 for the hair....2 for the bg so far...2 for the pants...etc.
Honestly, there's no point in doing stuff on one layer. it's the end product that counts imo.
haha, nahh, my composition is pretty boring. thanks, I'm happy with the hair too...and his face. I suck at profiles these days. faces in general.

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fullcreamilk In reply to Silent-Neutral [2010-04-29 10:34:39 +0000 UTC]

haha well i did [link] all on one layer. <3 it was ass haha believe me. but it helped to be tidy

unfff
omgggg.
I LOVE YOUR ART FFFFFFFF like you would draw Heavy Rain characters so well fff. go and check that game out and get it, man. ps3 exclusive for ya

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Silent-Neutral In reply to fullcreamilk [2010-04-29 14:46:11 +0000 UTC]

haha oh really? How long did it take you.
I meant doing a big thing on one layer is pointless, you might as well get it right and use a bunch of layers if you wanted to do something big or whatever. But I abuse Layers like no tomorrow...ever since I learned the true power of them xD

haha...xD maybe...
I know. I wouldn't mind getting it, but I want Bayonetta first...and then there's Shattered memories for PS2...If I had of remembered of SM, I woulda got that instead of that DMC anime >_<

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GrayWolfTsume [2010-04-28 20:21:52 +0000 UTC]

oh very cool idea so far i want to hear more from this

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Silent-Neutral In reply to GrayWolfTsume [2010-04-29 10:16:22 +0000 UTC]

thankyou~ <3

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GrayWolfTsume In reply to Silent-Neutral [2010-04-29 19:50:34 +0000 UTC]

you are most welcome

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TerrorGhoul [2010-04-28 16:21:26 +0000 UTC]

*A* VVVVEEEEERRRRGGGGGIIIIILLLLL!!!!!!! I'll cure him with the power of LOVE. XP

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Silent-Neutral In reply to TerrorGhoul [2010-04-29 10:00:50 +0000 UTC]

HAHA very true~ <3

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projectTiGER [2010-04-28 13:52:43 +0000 UTC]

I like my men wounded -shot-
ANYWAY, it looks pretty good, from what I can tell from the WIP alone. Awesome lineart on his body

I do have a slight problem with his arm - it reminds me a little of a toy figurine where the arm is detachable. I THINK it's the lineart..but I'm not really sure...orz

On a completely unrelated note, I hate coloring at the beginning stage. Everything looks so incomplete and GAAAH..

Finally, best of luck on your assignment! :3

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Silent-Neutral In reply to projectTiGER [2010-04-28 14:07:33 +0000 UTC]

yah, cos then they have to show off their body

haha I had a prob with the arm to. actually, i thought it was kinda short.
ooh, detachable...well I can erase part of the lineart. I 'may' decide to lengthen the arm a little..idk.

xD I like putting base colours down. it's the easist part!

Thankyou m'dear ;_; I really hope they won't kick me out TT__TT

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projectTiGER In reply to Silent-Neutral [2010-04-29 03:16:33 +0000 UTC]

OH OH OH WAIT A BIT, I THINK I GET IT NOW.

The arm itself is foreshortened slightly and proportionate (at least, with what little I know of the head-rule) so I figure it's the shape of the bandage that's throwing off the sense of forshortening.

ASDJKFASLKJDF I DON'T KNOW. RANDOM COMMENT IS RANDOM OTL

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Silent-Neutral In reply to projectTiGER [2010-04-29 09:58:02 +0000 UTC]

well I figure that your elbow should just touch your hip bone. so I probs made his torso too long...either way, i'll just lengthen his arm a little so it looks a little less disproportionate x)

Haha! yes! some time we should, when our to do lists aren't so long...I'm involved in a collab atm anyway

;_; thanks for the encouragement. I'm trying yes! it's due tmr...My model's face looks...idk, it looks silly, and everyone has something different to say about what he looks like.

ohh bandage? ;_; what should I do?? change the direction it's wrapping around his arm??? argh..I'll lengthen it first and make any more changes if need be.

haha thankyou for trying to help me though! I really appreciate it !

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projectTiGER In reply to Silent-Neutral [2010-05-02 04:18:23 +0000 UTC]

Oh, well, that too. (touch the hip bone? Isn't the elbow supposed to be aligned to the belly button...-frantically searches anatomy books-)

Don't worry about it dood, all in good time!

I hear you already completed it. (sob this is what happens when I reply late orz)

Personally, I'd make it more curved, to show foreshortening..or something..orz. I just change stuff according to mah awesome INSTINCTS -shot-

You're very welcome..tis' all I can do. ;u;

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projectTiGER In reply to Silent-Neutral [2010-04-29 03:08:35 +0000 UTC]

Oh yes

Hmmm, now that you mentioned it, it does look a tad short..I think I brushed that off when I thought it was for foreshortening purposes.

QuQ We should totally collab lol, I hate putting base colors down. It's azdkjhfalsdhf unbearable (is no patient lol). I find color mixing, shading, everything else lol more enjoyable.

;u; They can't possibly kick you out over only one assignment. If all universities were so strict they'd lose a good majority of their students before the first term ended. :3

Doesn't mean you should slack off though lol. Gogogogogo!

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RivaraMyist [2010-04-28 12:03:11 +0000 UTC]

I like it, I like it! ~<3

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Silent-Neutral In reply to RivaraMyist [2010-04-28 12:49:54 +0000 UTC]

awuh thankyou hun

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RivaraMyist In reply to Silent-Neutral [2010-04-28 23:40:31 +0000 UTC]

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