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SilentGPanda β Rejected Comic
Published: 2014-02-11 05:03:49 +0000 UTC; Views: 1941; Favourites: 44; Downloads: 19
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This is the third comic that been rejected,Β no matter how hard i try it still ends up with the same result.Related content
Comments: 19
Oooohhhh...Β
So that's what was going on the whooooolle time...
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bahahaha! xD that is epic! I love the action and the ending! oh please don't keep this a reject! keep it going! XD
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I really love the concept for this, I've read it 3 times and it just gets better every time.
The only thing I can recommend as an improvement would be to extend the pages and take your time to build up the dramatic tension, other than that, great job and I hope it's accepted and that you can keep up the good work
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i agree. theΒ art is fantastic. dont give up until you succeed!
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...or die trying!! thank you!
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I can see a few things that may have caused the rejection. There are a few misspellings that you may want to go back over.
The art is awesome, but there is too much going on in the fact that everything is crammed together. Perhaps Changing "Camera" angles would help and when they do "EPIC" things, such as the casting of the spells, I personally believe they deserve larger panels and more detail.
Wasn't really feeling the dialogue so well, maybe if you say " I call upon the powers of so-and-so... " then in the larger detailed panel of the cool spell you can say what the spell is. Just don't over do it.
Those are most likely the reasons why I can see it was rejected. You have talent, great attention to detail, unique characters, AND the most important, you know your gutters and text balloons. I do like this piece, and I feel the people who rejected your comic strip should give it another look and give you constructive criticism and positively tell you why they rejected your strip.Β
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i really appreciate you taking the time to read my comic and give such great advice, thanks a lot!!!
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Reference to a super edgy character in any installment.
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so that's what it means! i learn a new thing today!
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Yep, way to 'level up'.Β
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oh, you've done such a wonderful job!
The last panel lol XD
Well, that's sad >.<
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this is pretty good. But i guess i cant tell why but it feels like its missing something.Β
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if only i knew what it was....
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^^|||||| well good luck I cant wait to see what you have new in store.Β
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This is brilliant, you did an amazing job on this.
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