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Published: 2014-02-11 05:03:49 +0000 UTC; Views: 1940; Favourites: 44; Downloads: 19
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This is the third comic that been rejected,Β no matter how hard i try it still ends up with the same result.Related content
Comments: 19
lagyacrus [2015-04-30 09:41:58 +0000 UTC]
Oooohhhh...Β
So that's what was going on the whooooolle time...
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Zugataga [2014-10-13 16:09:33 +0000 UTC]
bahahaha! xD that is epic! I love the action and the ending! oh please don't keep this a reject! keep it going! XD
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JakePColeman [2014-02-19 16:06:55 +0000 UTC]
I really love the concept for this, I've read it 3 times and it just gets better every time.
The only thing I can recommend as an improvement would be to extend the pages and take your time to build up the dramatic tension, other than that, great job and I hope it's accepted and that you can keep up the good work
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Blackboarded [2014-02-11 21:25:10 +0000 UTC]
i agree. theΒ art is fantastic. dont give up until you succeed!
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SilentGPanda In reply to Blackboarded [2014-02-13 08:00:04 +0000 UTC]
...or die trying!! thank you!
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sethwolfheart [2014-02-11 17:58:20 +0000 UTC]
I can see a few things that may have caused the rejection. There are a few misspellings that you may want to go back over.
The art is awesome, but there is too much going on in the fact that everything is crammed together. Perhaps Changing "Camera" angles would help and when they do "EPIC" things, such as the casting of the spells, I personally believe they deserve larger panels and more detail.
Wasn't really feeling the dialogue so well, maybe if you say " I call upon the powers of so-and-so... " then in the larger detailed panel of the cool spell you can say what the spell is. Just don't over do it.
Those are most likely the reasons why I can see it was rejected. You have talent, great attention to detail, unique characters, AND the most important, you know your gutters and text balloons. I do like this piece, and I feel the people who rejected your comic strip should give it another look and give you constructive criticism and positively tell you why they rejected your strip.Β
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SilentGPanda In reply to sethwolfheart [2014-02-13 07:56:43 +0000 UTC]
i really appreciate you taking the time to read my comic and give such great advice, thanks a lot!!!
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yamibanner In reply to SilentGPanda [2014-02-13 05:01:04 +0000 UTC]
Reference to a super edgy character in any installment.
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SilentGPanda In reply to yamibanner [2014-02-13 08:09:17 +0000 UTC]
so that's what it means! i learn a new thing today!
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yamibanner In reply to SilentGPanda [2014-02-13 19:36:05 +0000 UTC]
Yep, way to 'level up'.Β
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xStarCat [2014-02-11 08:44:01 +0000 UTC]
oh, you've done such a wonderful job!
The last panel lol XD
Well, that's sad >.<
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OujoAsuka [2014-02-11 05:39:07 +0000 UTC]
this is pretty good. But i guess i cant tell why but it feels like its missing something.Β
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SilentGPanda In reply to OujoAsuka [2014-02-12 02:41:14 +0000 UTC]
if only i knew what it was....
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OujoAsuka In reply to SilentGPanda [2014-02-13 03:29:31 +0000 UTC]
^^|||||| well good luck I cant wait to see what you have new in store.Β
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Inferno727 [2014-02-11 05:27:24 +0000 UTC]
This is brilliant, you did an amazing job on this.
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