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SilkwormM2 In reply to PovGiantess [2010-11-18 02:51:16 +0000 UTC]

No prob.

Any suggestions on how to refine it inparticular (eg. critisms, scene changes)?

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PovGiantess In reply to SilkwormM2 [2010-11-18 03:00:21 +0000 UTC]

I guess the only thing that I would try and change is having it be to where she's leanning forward a little to where we can see her face as she's sitting down on him. Other Than that, just refining the lineart would be great and propabably having in be in either black or red tights. PG

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SilkwormM2 In reply to PovGiantess [2010-11-18 03:03:52 +0000 UTC]

Hmm, maybe more of a upward perspective, like my 'Just Like Onee san' pic. It would be the best way to try and get in her face anyway, without making the boy ridiculously far away and tiny.

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PovGiantess In reply to SilkwormM2 [2010-11-18 03:15:34 +0000 UTC]

That POV would be just able right. Do you think her sitting on him forwards and looking down would make the POV work better? Kind of like this POV [link] Having him on the ground in about the same position but she would be sitting on him facing him and having this general POV. How does that sound? PG

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