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Published: 2003-10-18 01:31:33 +0000 UTC; Views: 63; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 11
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Inside all of us resides a beast.One full of anger and hatred
We cannot resist
Temptation to give in is too great
It comes out
Jaws hungering for blood
It kills and kills
Satisfying itβs raw bloodlust
It glories in the screams of the innocent
But then you wake up
Wondering why blood covers your entire body
The memories elude you
The joy of bloodlust fades
You are left with guilt wondering
Whether you have just live a nightmare
You look around trying to find a semblance of reality
That will tell you everything was just a dream
What you see will haunt you forever
For you see bodies littered around you
As if a beast mutilated them all
You fall to the floor
With tears in your eyes
Knowing that you murdered all your loved ones.
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Comments: 15
son-kimmicko [2003-10-21 01:08:43 +0000 UTC]
WOW! This is amazing! Very well done *appluads* Many Kuddos!
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Silver-Rage In reply to son-kimmicko [2003-10-21 02:54:38 +0000 UTC]
Thanx. N u were the one who introduce me 2 pu-sama's work.
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son-kimmicko In reply to Silver-Rage [2003-10-21 20:11:32 +0000 UTC]
^^ I'm glad I did, I absolutly adore this poem!
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derangedfairy [2003-10-20 03:54:45 +0000 UTC]
holy shit.... wow.... ummm.... *speachless*
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Silver-Rage In reply to derangedfairy [2003-10-20 10:02:29 +0000 UTC]
Thanx. I am guessing u like it.
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derangedfairy In reply to Silver-Rage [2003-10-20 14:39:03 +0000 UTC]
umm... yea.... lol
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mukuro [2003-10-20 00:25:58 +0000 UTC]
Nicely worded. It's hard/scary to come to the realization that there is a beast of temptation inside us all. Most of us know it's there, but fail to admit it.
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Silver-Rage In reply to mukuro [2003-10-20 00:30:19 +0000 UTC]
Thanx u r rite it is hard to admit that we have a great capacity for evil.
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Alexanders-Dream [2003-10-18 09:40:26 +0000 UTC]
Wow, it brought a tear to my eyes, very beautifully written
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Alexanders-Dream In reply to Alexanders-Dream [2003-10-18 11:59:25 +0000 UTC]
your welcome, I can't say enough on how beautifully you wrote this
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Silver-Rage In reply to Alexanders-Dream [2003-10-19 09:02:09 +0000 UTC]
Thanx but in a way it's kinda scary hey.
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Alexanders-Dream In reply to Silver-Rage [2003-10-19 09:04:20 +0000 UTC]
yes it can be very scary, but we all have it, and your always welcome
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Silver-Rage In reply to Alexanders-Dream [2003-10-18 11:08:27 +0000 UTC]
Thanx I think u got the emotion I was trying to convey.
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Silver-Rage In reply to theblackwillow [2003-10-18 06:50:31 +0000 UTC]
Thanx like I said furst time I done something like that.
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