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Published: 2004-02-27 16:26:42 +0000 UTC; Views: 314; Favourites: 6; Downloads: 74
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Description Sometimes unknowingly my mind wanders
To a time before
When I was a different person
To a time when I led an innocent life

I once was sure of my path
Before I did the things that changed who I was
What happened to my innocent carefree self
Why is my life so complicated
My emotions so tangled
I feel as if chains bind my soul

I want to be free
Why was I so stupid
Why did I make those mistakes
I was so young and naive
But I cannot change the past
Hell nobody can
I can only live with the pain and the memories
Praying that in time I may learn to forgive myself
Instead of living a life in misery

I guess all I can do is go on
Anger, sadness, loss, confusion, pain
I live with these emotions
As if they are the air that I breathe

I am what I am
Good and bad
I guess I have to be happy with that
I just don't know anymore
If only I had not strayed from innocence
Might I be happy now
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Comments: 53

Silver-Rage In reply to ??? [2005-03-14 02:34:49 +0000 UTC]

Thank u, I will pass the kudos to the artist.

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emmystar In reply to Silver-Rage [2005-03-14 10:06:28 +0000 UTC]

V^-^V I like Dark-san!
Hihihi

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AngelicHell [2005-02-08 23:27:16 +0000 UTC]

This is good. I think that you would like my brother's work as well as I like yours. is my brother. I am fav.ing this.

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Silver-Rage In reply to AngelicHell [2005-02-10 12:58:24 +0000 UTC]

Thanks for the comment and fave, glad u like the poem I will go c his work.

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AngelicHell In reply to Silver-Rage [2005-02-10 17:27:32 +0000 UTC]

His writing isamazing just like yours. *shoots brother* maybe I would feel better if I didn't shoot my brother.

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DarkFeruil [2004-07-28 20:15:39 +0000 UTC]

Very stunning! I think I can relate to this a lot! The feeling and imagery you put into this piece is very inspiring!! ^^ Mew!! Love it!!

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Silver-Rage In reply to DarkFeruil [2004-07-29 00:12:45 +0000 UTC]

Thank u *bows*. I think we can all relate to this one a lot. Thanks again.

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SilentShinji [2004-04-02 12:45:02 +0000 UTC]

nice !

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Silver-Rage In reply to SilentShinji [2004-04-02 13:26:51 +0000 UTC]

Thanks I wrote the poem, my fren drew that pic.

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theblackwillow [2004-03-10 06:59:59 +0000 UTC]

deep, very deep. great work

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Silver-Rage In reply to theblackwillow [2004-03-10 09:45:59 +0000 UTC]

Thank u me glad u like.

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atlantisangel [2004-03-10 02:46:05 +0000 UTC]

WHOA! Talented!
Wonderful works!
They fit beautifully together!
I love the line art in the pic! Wonderful cging as well!!!

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Silver-Rage In reply to atlantisangel [2004-03-10 09:39:49 +0000 UTC]

Thank u *bows* on behalf of me fren n meself. Me glad u like.

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HeathenGecko [2004-03-06 12:17:03 +0000 UTC]

very clean and stylized! I like it.

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Silver-Rage In reply to HeathenGecko [2004-03-06 14:38:26 +0000 UTC]

I am glad u like the art. I will pass on the kudos to my fren who drew it.

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Majinj [2004-02-29 08:19:38 +0000 UTC]

That is so true..... That is basically how I feel every single day...but I just have to keep on living I guess.... Well, Great picture....and great poem ^_^


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*Saw The "assion" and is now inspired ....to do good....

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Silver-Rage In reply to Majinj [2004-02-29 09:51:09 +0000 UTC]

Thank u n I guess this is true for most people. Thank u again *bows* Truly my fren is a great artist so yeah. ^_^

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Majinj In reply to Silver-Rage [2004-02-29 09:55:35 +0000 UTC]

Your welcome..yeah it is a problem mainly teens face...

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Silver-Rage In reply to Majinj [2004-02-29 11:35:19 +0000 UTC]

Yeah well mistakes n regrets r a part of life

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Alexanders-Dream [2004-02-29 03:51:15 +0000 UTC]

I really enjoyed this and I know the exact feelings that you wrote, it was kinda self explainatory

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Silver-Rage In reply to Alexanders-Dream [2004-02-29 03:53:04 +0000 UTC]

Thank u *bows*. Yeah it was.

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Alexanders-Dream In reply to Silver-Rage [2004-02-29 04:02:17 +0000 UTC]

and your welcome

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PkingSora [2004-02-28 23:47:05 +0000 UTC]

interesting poem..i love the picture aswell..they both go together

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Silver-Rage In reply to PkingSora [2004-02-29 02:53:37 +0000 UTC]

Thank u. I am glad u like the poem. Yes I adore the pic myself. Gave me back the inspiration to write when I saw it so yeah.

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Daiichi [2004-02-28 17:05:48 +0000 UTC]

A good return to DA..

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Silver-Rage In reply to Daiichi [2004-02-29 01:44:07 +0000 UTC]

Thank u.

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kiyoshiwithpen [2004-02-28 15:34:26 +0000 UTC]

nice art and poem!!!

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Silver-Rage In reply to kiyoshiwithpen [2004-02-29 01:30:16 +0000 UTC]

Thank u. I say that on behalf of my fren. Her art is great no. Thanx I am glad u liked the poem.

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Verchiel [2004-02-28 00:51:02 +0000 UTC]

NICE work! I love it! ^^ Great work!

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Silver-Rage In reply to Verchiel [2004-02-28 02:36:31 +0000 UTC]

Thank u. I am glad u like it.

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Verchiel In reply to Silver-Rage [2004-02-28 03:02:33 +0000 UTC]

Your more than welcome! ^^

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Verchiel In reply to Silver-Rage [2004-02-28 03:02:29 +0000 UTC]

Your more than welcome! ^^

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Silver-Rage In reply to Verchiel [2004-02-28 12:26:08 +0000 UTC]

Thank u *bows*

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Verchiel In reply to Silver-Rage [2004-02-29 14:43:39 +0000 UTC]

*hugs* ^^

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son-kimmicko [2004-02-28 00:46:19 +0000 UTC]

Hey, I was wondering what happened t you, haven't heard from you for a long while This is beautifully written, wonderfull job on the imagery

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Silver-Rage In reply to son-kimmicko [2004-02-28 00:50:31 +0000 UTC]

I was on holiday n then my comp got screwed so yeah. Thank u, hmm imagery. Yeah Yami no Matsuei music helped there.

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twinklee [2004-02-27 23:53:19 +0000 UTC]

Hmm....ever think about truning thoes lines into a song it could work you know..nice imagery in the poem though

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Silver-Rage In reply to twinklee [2004-02-28 00:08:11 +0000 UTC]

Thanx mate n yes it did occur to me after I finish writing that it sounded like a song. Thank u, I aim to please. Honestly tho u did the work, I just get inspired n considering what the pic is that is probably y it sounds like a song.

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sa55y [2004-02-27 20:35:40 +0000 UTC]

I felt every word. It's like your telling my story too. I guess everyone must feel that way, and some take it harder than others. But in the end we all just have to live with what we can't change. Any number of things could have changed the course of your history, it's too complicated to even contemplate, and too futile!

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Silver-Rage In reply to sa55y [2004-02-27 23:59:44 +0000 UTC]

Umm thanx sass. Hmm well everyone feels that way at some point so yeah. Yeah that is life. We all just live on knowing that we just have to.

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changethecombo [2004-02-27 16:58:12 +0000 UTC]

eh. repitition of 'stupid' was unnecesary:
"Why was I so stupid
Why did I make those mistakes
I was so young and stupid"
pretty good, but what was your point? where were you trying to take the character dude?
a decent poem.

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Silver-Rage In reply to changethecombo [2004-02-27 17:10:35 +0000 UTC]

Well I guess I saw it as the guy is angry with himself n is confused. Not meant to b coherentt when u r confused.

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burn-with-me [2004-02-27 16:40:46 +0000 UTC]

you're back! *hugs* was wondering about you! Great piece the one time when reapeating the same word (stupid) has actually sounded ok in my lil head Great to see your work again ^-^

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Silver-Rage In reply to burn-with-me [2004-02-27 16:44:09 +0000 UTC]

Thank u. I was on holiday n them my comp. was fucked. Man it is good to b back on da. Am catching up on deviations.

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burn-with-me In reply to Silver-Rage [2004-02-27 17:17:13 +0000 UTC]

I'm glad you're back I have missed you!

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Silver-Rage In reply to burn-with-me [2004-02-28 00:41:05 +0000 UTC]

N I miss u 2.

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burn-with-me In reply to Silver-Rage [2004-02-29 12:55:13 +0000 UTC]

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Silver-Rage In reply to burn-with-me [2004-02-28 00:40:15 +0000 UTC]

It feels good to b back.

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Ladyofspira [2004-02-27 16:29:42 +0000 UTC]

Niiiiccceeee!!! Love it!!

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Silver-Rage In reply to Ladyofspira [2004-02-27 16:34:20 +0000 UTC]

Thank u. I am glad u enjoyed all of it.

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