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Silver-Rage — Faith
Published: 2003-11-12 12:18:29 +0000 UTC; Views: 102; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 15
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In this worldIf you lose faith
You will lose your will to live
You must always hope and believe
That everything will get better
Because it can and will
Do not let the world break your spirit
Instead let your spirit guide you
Because it will give you the strength to endure
If you believe that it can
This world is full of hope, of light
But you have to believe in yourself
And hang on to your hopes and dreams
Because without it you might as well be dead
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Thanx I am really glad u thought so. ^_^
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very wonderfuly done. I really love how it goes with "believe".
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Thank u, it was meant to go with believe. Same theme diff. spin.
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It looks to me like this is looking at that moment from another perspective, opposite of Believe. *nods* Opposite twins.
One thing though, the poem cheers me on, but then ending up with "you might as well be dead." is kinda cruel. *lol* Maybe it's just me waking up...
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Thank u, u realise it was a diff. perspective. Well the ending was meant to b a shocker. Meant to make u guys notice what I am saying.
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The shock effect worked. *looks at the exploded heart monitor*
*lol*
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LOL shocking people can sometimes get the msg across better. But in my opinion a part of u always dies when u give up on ur dreams.
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*nods* That's how it feels with me. I die, and after a while I slowly start living again until I die once more.
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Yeah that's pretty much sums up my life as well.
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Awww... *hugs* I'm sorry to hear this...
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Nah it's cool. *hugs back* I have learned to survive.
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very cool, very positive
i love the way you write, it flows really well
newayz, great job...as always
kudos
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Thank u, I realise that sometimes u need to remember the good stuff. Thank u for the comment n praise. *bows* ur comment much appreciated.
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thankyou, that makes me feel a lot better. today i sang infront of the whole school and i have a cold and i had flem in my throat and i was so nervous it was awful, your poem makes me feel better
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U r welcome. Hmm by urself or with a group? I am glad u feel better *hugs*
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yay! Believe's twin! 
Being a pessimistic person, I better take this advice on board. 
Another great poem by Silver-Rage!
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Thank u, i am glad u found it inspiring. We can all get down sometimes but remember we always bounce back. Thank u again asagi-chan *bows*
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you don't have to thank me...*blush* but we have to always remember to bouce back. forget all that we've done wrong and walk forward towards a new day, and another chance to do what you first did wrong.
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Yes n remembering to bounce back can b hard but possible. U have to remember the good as well as the bad. N yeah yeaj we can do rite n noy screw up again.
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great work as usual
i love the theme that through believing in yourself and your spirit you can conquer or at least endure.
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Thank you ^_^
Yes it is something sometimes too easily forgotten.
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oh yeah 
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Thank u. I am glad u like this one. I realise all my stuff has I am not going b brought down feeling whether it b my happy or depressed stuff.
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^_^ this is quite inspiring..just like Believe..i hope alot of people read this..i know anyone who reads this will see the light..great job
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Thank u. Like I said it is believe's twin.
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