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Silver-Rage — Lost
Published: 2004-09-15 04:40:38 +0000 UTC; Views: 236; Favourites: 3; Downloads: 4
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Description I wander aimlessly
looking for what was mine
which was taken from me

I know that losing it
was my fault
that if I were somehow stronger
it would still be mine

Now I seek
wandering through dark corners
fighting demons along the way
knowing that if I do not find it
my life is forever in torment
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Comments: 16

hades143 [2004-11-28 18:08:02 +0000 UTC]

um... wow. so true. did you lose your sanity? just kidding. sometimes i think i do

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AithneEtain [2004-10-05 02:06:20 +0000 UTC]

i hope my ex is saying the same thing. i love this, very nicely done
+Aithne

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Silver-Rage In reply to AithneEtain [2004-10-05 02:25:48 +0000 UTC]

Thank u. I am glad u appreciate it.

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AithneEtain In reply to Silver-Rage [2004-10-05 02:28:43 +0000 UTC]

you are most welcome. i really liked it

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Silver-Rage In reply to AithneEtain [2004-10-12 07:22:59 +0000 UTC]

Thank u. I am glad u did ^_^

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AithneEtain In reply to Silver-Rage [2004-10-14 22:34:27 +0000 UTC]

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kage-no-tenshi [2004-09-16 07:26:21 +0000 UTC]

Good to see you again, Silver! And the poem... hmm... well, you were right for one. It is rather self-explanatory. I also believe that you've done a great job with it... the feel of it... well, all I can say is that the feeling reflected is something everybody will go through at least once in their lives. If this is taken the wrong way, I apologize, but if you're feeling lost, you're not alone. And I'm sure you'll find what you're looking for. Sometimes it takes entire lifetimes, but if one doesn't try, one will never know if what they sought was just around the corner.

thank you for sharing this. ^_^

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Silver-Rage In reply to kage-no-tenshi [2004-09-16 14:44:22 +0000 UTC]

Thank u. *bow* I do not take it the wrong way u r rite. I hope I find the elusive treasure. That is i true trying i what give life it meaning without it this is just an empty existence. U r welcome n I hope others learn to give up is the greastest loss of all.

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kiyoshiwithpen [2004-09-15 16:09:42 +0000 UTC]

angsty goodness

i feel this was sometimes V V;

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Silver-Rage In reply to kiyoshiwithpen [2004-09-16 00:06:47 +0000 UTC]

Thanks n yeah we all feel this way sometimes.

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cornflakes [2004-09-15 04:54:50 +0000 UTC]

eee! more silver work! love it hun! it's a very sad and morbid poem, but somehow how it gives a sense of hope to the reader, like they shouldn't give up on things that matter to them.

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Silver-Rage In reply to cornflakes [2004-09-15 05:11:54 +0000 UTC]

*bows* Thank u. U r one of my biggest gans It is rather sad n morbid but yet hopeful cos' that is one of the facts of life. U can overcome anything if u but try. N i would never give up on stuff that matters to me like my frens n my identity.

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FL1ckER [2004-09-15 04:48:01 +0000 UTC]

Another awesome poem. The sad but determined air is very well done.

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Silver-Rage In reply to FL1ckER [2004-09-15 05:17:46 +0000 UTC]

Thank u *bows*. Sad but determined is alas my life.

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tsquared In reply to Silver-Rage [2004-09-16 04:51:27 +0000 UTC]

me too I never get a break =_=+

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Silver-Rage In reply to tsquared [2004-09-17 06:23:33 +0000 UTC]

Oh yeah

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