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Silver-Rage — Raging lust [NSFW]
Published: 2004-07-28 02:09:05 +0000 UTC; Views: 333; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 12
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Description This raging fire in my soul
Refuses to leave me in peace
Until I have you again
But every time I take you
A part of me dies
For what I do to you
Is what no man should do to another
I feel as if my skin is crawling
For I claim you as my own
In every way imaginable
Yet you do not stop me
Because you love me
You will let me toy with you
Till the end of eternity
Even if I may never love you
But only lust for you
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Comments: 18

animelover8834 [2006-10-12 08:13:51 +0000 UTC]

that was beautiful,

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Silver-Rage In reply to animelover8834 [2006-11-06 08:50:14 +0000 UTC]

thanks

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p-assassin [2004-08-02 07:21:47 +0000 UTC]

bit gutsy innit. what poetic expression is about. good topic / feeling

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soul-bearers [2004-07-31 01:54:43 +0000 UTC]

HAHAHAHHAAHA!!!!!! sorry,.....i just pissed myself reading this.... .....eheheh...hmm.....sounds more like tatsumi....except for the errr....toying bit.........

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Silver-Rage In reply to soul-bearers [2004-08-01 10:20:03 +0000 UTC]

Hmm ok well if u think so 2.

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soul-bearers In reply to Silver-Rage [2004-08-01 10:21:51 +0000 UTC]

you ok???? u sound kinda bummed....

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kiyoshiwithpen [2004-07-28 21:31:28 +0000 UTC]

oooohhhhhhh!! nice!! ^__^
the one talking sounds like a seme ! ^. ^:;

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Silver-Rage In reply to kiyoshiwithpen [2004-07-29 00:33:40 +0000 UTC]

Oh he is definitely seme. ^_^

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kiyoshiwithpen In reply to kiyoshiwithpen [2004-07-28 21:36:07 +0000 UTC]

hmm hmmm ^^: what about hisoka ?
muriaki like to toy with him alot!!

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Silver-Rage In reply to kiyoshiwithpen [2004-07-29 00:36:35 +0000 UTC]

That is true hey.

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DarkFeruil [2004-07-28 19:57:07 +0000 UTC]

Mew!! Nice wording and imagery!! XD I shall read more of your poems now!!! ^^

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Silver-Rage In reply to DarkFeruil [2004-07-29 00:08:18 +0000 UTC]

Thank u, I am glad u think so *bows*.

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cornflakes [2004-07-28 02:52:59 +0000 UTC]

wow! i love the imagery in this poem, it's awesome! i also suspected some sort of lust or tension between Tatsumi and Tsuzuki, but they were never able to admit to it. it's sad even though hisoka and tsuzuki is my fav pairing.

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Silver-Rage In reply to cornflakes [2004-07-28 03:48:41 +0000 UTC]

Thank u. I am glad u liked it. Well I like all the pairings in YnM. Well u know that there is something between tatsumi n tsuzuki. It's like hinted at.

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damarikomu [2004-07-28 02:23:55 +0000 UTC]

Hmmm... Well put into words. I can imagine it feeling exactly like that.

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Silver-Rage In reply to damarikomu [2004-07-28 02:44:25 +0000 UTC]

Thank u *bows*. I guess u got what I was trying to say.

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damarikomu In reply to Silver-Rage [2004-07-28 06:06:47 +0000 UTC]

Ohhh... I wish I got that. *lol*

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Silver-Rage In reply to damarikomu [2004-07-28 14:42:06 +0000 UTC]

LOL I guess.

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