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Silver-Rage — Scarred
Published: 2003-11-14 09:12:59 +0000 UTC; Views: 299; Favourites: 5; Downloads: 127
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Sometimes I just want to screamAt the unfairness in this world
Become cold and heartless
So I may not feel the pain
That exist in this world
Why is it I always seem to suffer
Damn it to hell
Does everyone have scars
That never seem to heal
Scars which haunt them
And torment them unto death
I see all of this but can do nothing
For eventhough I have found the inner strength to endure
Not everyone has
And it is something they must discover on their own
I can only sit there and watch
As I see the ones I care for suffer
Sometimes my soul cries along with theirs
As I hold their hand and comfort them
That is all I can do
And it rips my soul apart but that is life
The strong endure and pray
That the weak will learn to survive
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Comments: 49
Thank u for the comment n yeah u have to find ur own way. It just hurts to c ur frens stumble or live in ignorance.
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i agree, but theres really nothing u can do except b there for them
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Yeah n that hurts but that is life.
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O_O Wow very strong and ....ok I suck at trying to say stuff about poems and stuff but it is good
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Thank u *bows*. All comments r appreciated.
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Hey! That's such a great poem! I have friends who make me feel exactly the same way..A friend of mine alerted me that I was actually on the favorites section for my category "Emotional Poetry" ..So when I saw yours I thought, this looks good..and boy is it! Great job!
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Thanx I was really surprised at the popularity of thispoem. I gues thiis is a fact of life for many people. I have many frens who make me feel this way as well. Hmm I am on the fave section under Emotional Poetry, we never get to c our own work under the face list. Thanx I am glad u like it and thanx for the fave.
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More than welcome..Don't be surprised if you see a lot more of me pop up..I plan to visit your page sometime..
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Well I hope u enjoy my stuff. I always think the worst of my stuff.
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Yeah that is life unfortunately.
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Thank u. I am glad u felt that way.
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Wow, I really like it! 
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Thank u n I am glad u like it. Yeah n it hurts to c the ones u care for in pain ain't it.
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Wow! This poem is really deep. It's SUPER good. I like it a ton!
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Thank u. I try to please. ^_^ u r pretty cool urself.
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Me keep forgetting the code that's y. ^_^
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Just do this : hug : Without the spaces.
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thats really good, nice thing to share emotions with someone but hard asewell, but people who try to understand you can enoying doh ya really should be glad someone try'es.
sorry, i dont know what im talking about 
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Thank u. No I understand u in a way, was confused at some parts tho. Thank u again.
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haha, sorry, i was really tierd
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Very, very good. I know the frustration when I can't help someone who feels down.
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Thank u for the comment. Yeah n sometimes with enuf frustration, we ourselves become upset. Thanx for the fave btw.
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You're welcome. Thank you for your poetry.
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^_^ *bows*
I was thinking of that abba song that goes thank u for the music.
Honestly I am glad that everyone on da is so supportive.
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Wow, I loved it, and I can relate so much. "pray That the weak will learn to endure" - I do that all the time, because I hate seeing people depressed and knowing I can't help
But you're right, that is life.
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thank u, i am glad u like it. yeah n especially when they r not following their dreams. It rips my sould out n sometimes we 2 become depressed. But they have to learn their own lessons, that is life.
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I can only sit there and watch
As I see the ones I care for suffer
Sometimes my soul cries along with theirs
As I hold their hand and comfort them
That is all I can do
And it rips my soul apart but that is life
The strong endure and pray
That the weak will learn to endure
the whole thing was amazing but that was my absolute fav thing...
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Thank u. To me that is a fact of life, it is enescapable. Sometimes the strong perish trying to save the weak, but in a way that is worth it.
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People must learn not to be selfish about their emotions. good or bad.
And they should learn to take someone's hand and know that person cares.
But I'm just rambling.
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Wow thank u. That never occured to me but thank u.
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wow....wow
im speechless
this is (i think) one of your best
very meaningful, love the poem
kudos
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thank u *bows profusely*. I am glad u like it so much. Honestly because it has a different atmosphere than my happy stuff I was worried what u guys would think. *phew* I am just glad u guys didn't chuck tomatoes at me. *relieved expression on face*
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Sometimes those who have chosen must bear the indecision of those who haven't n that hurts.
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Thought it was just me...
Everyone must walk their own path and make their own destiny.
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Hmm I think many of us feel that way we just don't talk about it.
Yup everyone must decide what they want out of life on their own. N they must discover the part of them that will allow them to do that.
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