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Wisdom is sometimes gained through bitter painBut that is life
We learn things the hard way
Or not at all
Wisdom stops us from doing wrong again and again
But sometimes we just don't learn
And it takes a few knocks
Before we realise what we do wrong
Wisdom only comes
If we stop lying to ourselves
And admit to ourselves our greatest hopes and fears
Because if we don't do that
We will forever live in torment and doubt
I have finally realised that
And am taking my own advice
I now seek the truth in my heart
For only then will wisdom be gained
And I will be set free from my troubles
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Comments: 32
neko-chan89 [2004-03-24 23:33:05 +0000 UTC]
very good indeed *nodnod* and true
*tumbsup* good job
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Silver-Rage In reply to neko-chan89 [2004-03-25 00:11:30 +0000 UTC]
Thank u. It is true much to the suffering i went thru to learn some things.
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neko-chan89 In reply to Silver-Rage [2004-03-25 00:24:15 +0000 UTC]
same here..but it was for the best
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ondabrinkosanity [2003-12-10 23:51:13 +0000 UTC]
ok so yeah good i like reading thougts and what people think (your poem and what people have said) Idk when they say ignorance is bliss i kinda think of being a kid and the happy (in my head completely made up blissful world of imagination) childhood but as you poem points out learning is unfortunately needed
goody i liked it it was fun to read
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Silver-Rage In reply to ondabrinkosanity [2003-12-11 00:51:28 +0000 UTC]
Thank u n isn't that the truth. It hurts to learn but that is life.
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ladyjazz [2003-11-27 23:33:30 +0000 UTC]
Good lessons in themselves -- well done. I often write down the lessons I learn, too, and sometimes in the form of poetry. When it comes down to it, those of us who can think for ourselves and take responsibility for our actions give our own best advice. It's important to know that with pain comes wisdom and understanding. It's important to catch the reasons. Otherwise, we render our suffering meaningless. Very nice piece.
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Silver-Rage In reply to ladyjazz [2003-11-28 00:03:27 +0000 UTC]
Thank you. Sometimes it is very hard to swallow ur own advice but it is necessary no. Pain comes but it leaves leaving u smarter and stronger. Sometimes it is almost too easy to forget that. Yes we must learn from each moment of pain no matter how hard it is. Thank u again and I am glad u like it.
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son-kimmicko [2003-11-26 01:32:26 +0000 UTC]
It's sad but true, we learn through pain and sometimes it takes ALOT of pain. Nice job
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Silver-Rage In reply to son-kimmicko [2003-11-26 02:11:35 +0000 UTC]
Thank u n yeah this is one of the facts of life u either accept it or u don't.
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damarikomu [2003-11-25 21:10:20 +0000 UTC]
Well, I don't have to say you're right with all these comments, hehe...
And the title is good. It fits because I feel this is sort of an ode to wisdom.
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Silver-Rage In reply to damarikomu [2003-11-26 00:32:40 +0000 UTC]
Thank u n yeah in a way it is an ode to wisdom.
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Silver-Rage In reply to nushie [2003-11-25 14:56:26 +0000 UTC]
Yup it is a fundamental truth.
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PkingSora [2003-11-25 14:14:03 +0000 UTC]
hmmm i have ta agree with everyone..this is very true....being open bout it..just wow i guess..great job
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Silver-Rage In reply to PkingSora [2003-11-25 14:41:03 +0000 UTC]
I think the first step to wisdom is admitting all ur imperfections. Trust me we r lucky to make a mistake only once, we normally make them again n again.
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Silver-Rage In reply to theblackwillow [2003-11-25 14:19:58 +0000 UTC]
Yeah n sometimes a painful truth.
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sa55y [2003-11-25 08:23:22 +0000 UTC]
So true...so true..and very honest to apply it to urself so openly!
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Silver-Rage In reply to sa55y [2003-11-25 14:12:50 +0000 UTC]
I have made the same mistake again n again but I learn different things each time. Sometimes to admit to urself who u really r can b very scary but it is better tha way. Ignorance is not bliss in this case.
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sa55y In reply to Silver-Rage [2003-11-25 15:30:51 +0000 UTC]
When is ignorance bliss? knowing that you do'nt know is agony!!
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Silver-Rage In reply to sa55y [2003-11-25 15:36:22 +0000 UTC]
Oh n yeah knowing that u don't know something is hell alrite.
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Silver-Rage In reply to sa55y [2003-11-25 15:35:32 +0000 UTC]
Ignorance may feel like bliss when u r hurting. But the pain is worth it if it helps u learn.
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adanceinthedark [2003-11-25 06:56:26 +0000 UTC]
i think the name is totally appropriate, great piece
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Silver-Rage In reply to adanceinthedark [2003-11-25 14:14:43 +0000 UTC]
Thank u *bows* I am glad u like it
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Daiichi [2003-11-25 06:42:54 +0000 UTC]
Very very good poem..Lots of Truisms in there..I believe, though, your biggest obstacle, will be finding what you really feel inside..You'll still be battling all the aforementioned beliefs and problems in the poem, and yet you'll be finding them with an even more elusive subject..Good luck
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Silver-Rage In reply to Daiichi [2003-11-25 14:04:00 +0000 UTC]
Yup. Sometimes u think u got it n the next time u learn that u were wrong. Sometimes u just have to accep that it takes awhile to learn but u will get there eventually n thanx, I am gonna need it. I am still discovering my true self.
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Silver-Rage In reply to Silver-Rage [2003-11-25 15:00:10 +0000 UTC]
Yup I know. Like i said I wrote this awhile back, when I was in one of those moods. Now I am more into having fun mode. ^_^. Thanx for the advice tho
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Daiichi In reply to Silver-Rage [2003-11-25 14:56:30 +0000 UTC]
I doubt I was at that business any earlier than you were, and I'm still looking from time to time..It's tough business..You'll have to decide how you'll judge yourself..But of course you knew that..Don't spend too much time of your vacation pondering this stuff..
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Silver-Rage In reply to Daiichi [2003-11-25 15:13:43 +0000 UTC]
Yeah thanx for the advice n yeah I was thinking about it a month back in one of those of moods. I am now fully motivated in having fun n nothing but fun.
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