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He lay on the rocksStrength against the waves
He watched the new stars dance
Swirling and rising with the water
He glances down at his moonlit reflection
And feels it looking back
With eyes not his and a face not his own
Hair blacker than the watery night
Eyes of seaweed green stared back
The mermaid rose silently out of the wash
His gaze never left her enchanting colours
Without a thought he slipped into the
Seemingly calm water next to her
Her hands caressed his still warm body
Feeling icy scales against his legs
Heart racing, she gently pulls him under
Words unspoken course between them
Lips touch and hair mingles together
As delicate flowing fire
Aqua marine murk swirled around their forms
The surface flew further and further away
Lustful oblivion,
Pain burst in his chest
The need for air
She held him tighter
Panic seared into his fading mind
A faint smile touched her shiny lips
And held him tighter
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Comments: 13
FlaxenValley [2006-11-22 17:53:59 +0000 UTC]
Why do I sense a slightly sarcastic tone in this, ay?
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Silver7Rose In reply to FlaxenValley [2006-11-23 19:14:57 +0000 UTC]
i dunno, shld there be a sarcastic tone?
lmao, yeah well, sumtimes guys dnt use the head God put on the top of their bodies
no offense meant of course!
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Angel-Bella-Donna [2006-09-20 13:11:26 +0000 UTC]
lol - men are so easy when they think with thier... umm... not gonna finish that but love the imagery - well done!
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Silver7Rose In reply to Angel-Bella-Donna [2006-09-28 18:25:54 +0000 UTC]
yeah.... *coff coff* thanks alot shloomp
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fyapocalypse [2006-09-01 02:11:20 +0000 UTC]
I see this as a symbol of sexism. (duh!)
It's still nice..even though you're mocking me
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Silver7Rose In reply to fyapocalypse [2006-09-01 15:36:45 +0000 UTC]
lol, i wldnt dream of ever mocking U
im jus saying it about certain guys, not all of them
Thank you so much for checking out my scraps u rock!
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girly-werewolf [2006-08-26 19:49:35 +0000 UTC]
stupid male
he really should hav thought of the air factor
beautifully written
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Silver7Rose In reply to girly-werewolf [2006-08-27 13:28:27 +0000 UTC]
lol, thank u u really dont hav to watch my scraps, i know u get ALOT of messages an stuff
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girly-werewolf In reply to Silver7Rose [2006-09-03 13:17:52 +0000 UTC]
aww ur very welcome
besides, if i dnt you might submit a super good poem or pic and wont know about it
then ill be really angry with myself
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Silver7Rose In reply to girly-werewolf [2006-09-03 13:52:42 +0000 UTC]
ur poems are also really good, u shld submit some!
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girly-werewolf In reply to Silver7Rose [2006-09-03 14:15:06 +0000 UTC]
aww thankies, i guess i just usually write when im depressed (thats why my poems are always so sad
) but mayb ill try writing some happy poems soon
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