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Published: 2010-04-29 02:09:39 +0000 UTC; Views: 1329; Favourites: 19; Downloads: 14
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Description Hey guys, finally made some progress on my Uranus and Neptune piece. I was hoping you guys could help me out with a few things. First, I'm iffy on the colors, especially on Neptune. But their colors seem different in every piece of artwork I've seen, so I've had trouble deciding on colors. Also, Uranus's yellow bow seems really off, but I can't seem to pick the right color.

Lastly, I'm wondering if the shading on the skin and white parts of the costume on Uranus is enough, if it's got enough contrast to look... finished? Full? I can't even think of the word I'm searching for.

Anyway, all comments/critique are welcome and encouraged!
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Comments: 6

KeijiKunoichi [2010-09-26 00:08:00 +0000 UTC]

Try a paler yellow or a duller navy for Uranus.. or maybe pull the colours from this [link] I know She had problems getting the colours right too C& I doubt she'd mind you using her piece to help with colours)

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silverarmada In reply to KeijiKunoichi [2010-09-26 11:38:58 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! <3

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KeijiKunoichi In reply to silverarmada [2010-09-26 16:36:09 +0000 UTC]

No problem!

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SarahForde [2010-04-29 14:03:18 +0000 UTC]

Yesterday there was a DD that had a ton of color pallets: [link] Maybe you can find a yellow pallet in there for the bow? Maybe shading it with a more brownish color might help.

I think the depth of the shadow on the bodysuit and skin is going to depend on how far you go with the lighting on everything else, since you want it to be consistent. The shadows on the blue look a little more intense than the bodice does right now. You could probably add a little more shadow to some areas of the skin like right up under the skirt and maybe more on the back leg to make it fall behind?

Neptune's colors look fine to me

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silverarmada In reply to SarahForde [2010-04-29 15:30:51 +0000 UTC]

Thank you for all the comments, they're really helpful and I can't stress enough how much I appreciate them. <3<3<3

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SarahForde In reply to silverarmada [2010-04-29 15:47:43 +0000 UTC]

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