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MidniightStars [2014-05-30 03:23:01 +0000 UTC]

Overall

Vision

Originality

Technique

Impact

((Felt like critiquing so~))
Vision: Background is simple, but very blurry. The lightning strike definitely appears like its from the sky, which is good. The scythe is blurred a bit as well. However, the two blurred together looks a bit off to me. It looks like the scythe is appearing on the sky in stead of in Jason's hands. My opinion. This needs a bit of work but it's still a great effort. So is the perspective. Spot on.
Originality: This isn't your average CE. I like the creativity in this a lot. Especially since you added Jewel's charrie instead of yours. I'm very curious to see who wins this fight.
Technique: Lineless art is very complicated, but I think it turned out great. The coloring balances with the shading and lighting which is amazing. I think there could be some more light or a different way to produce light because of the lighting. Maybe add a white lighting to it, since lighting is mostly seen to be naturally light. Though I see why you chose yellow. The blood looks good, too. I'm not sure if blood can be very shiny but any legit blood is good in my book.
Impact: We see a very intriguing fight here. Very exciting. Now like I said, the background doesn't give much dynamic view. A good background requires detail, but not too much or it will be too much for the human eye. Maybe next time put that extra step into backgrounds. Especially when it comes to contests.
Overall, pretty good! I wish you good luck on the contest. Of course, there are things needed to improve, but I personally think it's a very worthy entry.

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