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SilverKazeNinja — Puppet Master Origin Part 1 - WIP
Published: 2011-12-09 03:50:40 +0000 UTC; Views: 914; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 12
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Going to be working on a small miniseries about a young man who becomes the King of Dolls, and is given the title of Puppet Master.Related content
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I'm not sure if this is the completed version or not (I'm pretty sure it's not) But inviting to make a critique lets me review based on first impression and concept. I'll make it blatantly apparent that my somewhat low portions of the rating are based off of its incomplete nature and that alone. For fairness I'll be sure to review the completed version as well... Again assuming this isn't the completed version. If it is then I apologize. This comic makes me curious about the character (who he is in the first place, his thoughts along with actions etc.) as it should. While I like the idea, I'm mostly bugging this picture on the spacing at the beginning. Though it's implied that those particular panels are the stereotypical "bordered" scenes, there should either be better indication of each panel or perhaps some better proportioning to each ones size. I'm also curious about the white panels at the bottom. Too much is asked from this picture and it begins to bug me when I analyse it. The style is done well in your usual sense and it was good to practice on this. Again, I hope that I'll be able to give a more fair critique upon a revised version, but for now don't quit your hobby. Best of luck to you in future endevors and I look forward to your new pieces of art in the community.
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Yeah, I was inspired by the boss of the same name in Castlevania: Dawn of Sorrow.
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XD I see...
*thinks back to the Rozen Maiden Suigintou fanart I did a while back* lol :3
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Lmao.
Oh crap... I haven't checked on Magnet Snake Woman in ages. o_oU
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It's fine XD Honestly I've been downplaying RP's lately anyways...
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Anywho... How's my favorite robot naga doing?
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She's mostly been training and taking it in docking mode. I'm giving her that upgrade soon, so I'm getting her wiring and circuits ready for it.
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Already. No major changes in her programming, I hope?
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Oh no, as a matter of fact I took that reprogram you placed and set it up as a program to launch at ocular recognition
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Ah, so as soon as she sees me?
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Indeed. I can have that tampered with if you like
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Well, I suppose that'd be nice...
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I thought you'd say that
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