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Silverlion — Fade
Published: 2005-09-07 04:18:44 +0000 UTC; Views: 108; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 0
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I am a shadeI am lost
let me go
let me fade
nothing left
that remains
but that which
reflects
nothing left
but that which
obscures
and laments
nothing left
let me wade
away into
the dim black sea
and at
last be
free
untarnished
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Comments: 9
this is well written, simple & succinct, but conveys so much emotion.
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poetically, u expressed us desperation at life well...
but its sad that u have to feel that way...
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I see that your poetic skills only get better with time, but is that how you truly feel? You only feel that you reflect others? Well, how about reflecting someone who has an intense love for life?
I wouldn't want you to just slip away. You're my friend and I've just barely got to know you.
If you really need someone to chat with, then send me a note. I'll be waiting.
Vaperfox of GENTEC
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Bit eveb a reflection of others, just of having once been alive, myself.
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il do as u wish, il let you go if thats -really- what u want. but u wont fade from me
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its bound to happen.....but theres always the good thats so unnoticed because of all the bad that take our attention from it
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I wish that were true.
I wish I could find some good.
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