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Silverlion — Goodbye
Published: 2007-07-26 21:58:09 +0000 UTC; Views: 92; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 3
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Description What words can be
spoken,
in the hushed moments
before we die?
What solace can
we give, before
we let go of life's
ongoing lie?
When is it my turn
to fade away
and be nothing
but a memory
lost beneath the sky.
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Comments: 5

Silverlion [2007-08-19 22:03:42 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much.

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Saek [2007-08-19 15:31:44 +0000 UTC]

Wow, this has superb flow. It's a beautiful poem, so I'm going to fav =3 (and hopefully, the words will just come by themselves)

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ThirtySecondMirage [2007-07-29 02:07:03 +0000 UTC]

thats beautiful. but solace is not what one should be looking for in those last moments before death. more like completion and satisfaction or peace. thats my two cents.

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Etelgrin [2007-07-26 22:00:54 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful, I love it

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Silverlion In reply to Etelgrin [2007-07-27 00:33:51 +0000 UTC]

Thank you.

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