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Silverlion — Passing
Published: 2005-08-24 22:27:32 +0000 UTC; Views: 129; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 3
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Description A tender kiss
how I ache
for eyes to glance
how I desire
for fierce heart
to meet
at last
mine
and yet
alone
I remain
unloved
empty
unfilled
dead
unmourned
crumbling
ash
for nothing
and
no
one
ever
gave for
me
and I gave
and gave
until
I was left
with
nothing.
Passing
away
all
in
all
it
decays
away
Passing
into
the
black
dim
end.
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Comments: 4

miskis [2005-12-14 00:54:02 +0000 UTC]

it has promise. I like the words, but how it is written gets choppy in some places interrupts the flow..

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inuyasha35 [2005-08-26 09:37:28 +0000 UTC]

I like this alot

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Silverlion In reply to inuyasha35 [2005-08-26 22:07:13 +0000 UTC]

Thanks lass.

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inuyasha35 In reply to Silverlion [2005-08-27 13:49:43 +0000 UTC]

your welcome lad

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