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Published: 2020-10-04 20:42:09 +0000 UTC; Views: 702; Favourites: 3; Downloads: 0
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The calm before the storm. Stephen makes his steps in the hallway of the school where he will meet the dokis.If you haven't read the details behind this fanfiction yet, I would suggest reading this first, before I enter in detail about this sketch: www.deviantart.com/silverpenci…
Just my personal observation, but I think I made Stephen have too many monologues. IDK, what do you guys think?
I mean those lines are kinda essential, since he is exploring the world and he's analyzing every element like a normal person would, if he/she got transported to a new world similar to his, but it isn't.
Also there is something that never crossed my mind up until now ->
*Does Stephen realize he's in anime style or how is he able to distinguish everybody from his POV?
I mean it's clear that this is my artstyle to illustrate this fanfiction, but logically I should've made Stephen question how everything looks around him, compared to the real world.
I certainly wouldn't stop staring at a "real life Monika", because my brain would just pause and I would have to wait a while for my mind to process everything that I am seeing and then I would let the reality sync in -> probably 2 agonizing minutes XD