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SilverWerewolf09 — Chapter 10 - Off The Familiar Path
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Chapter 10 of Werewolf Tale 2.-------------------------
And some more updates with this new chapter as well.
- I will be posting another deviation later today with e-book sample links, one in EPUB and another in MOBI. These samples will contain half of the current draft, which is pre-copy-edit #2.
- It seems Lulu uses a printer system that recognizes CMKY file formats, not RGB. Once this change goes into effect with the next sample prints, the issue the cover had with being too dark should be mostly fixed. Otherwise, whatever changes the future drafts bring can be easily moved to the templates I've got set up for the physical and e-versions of Werewolf Tale.
Until next time.
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Is there a link to the whole story of werewolf tale 2?
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Not at present. Still working on it.
I've got the next three chapters planned, but after that it's a bit of a minefield.
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None currently. Been working at the rewrite of the original for my second copy-editor for a while.
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Might be cool to add maybe Alex taking a glance at himself in the mirror before leaving for the house. Might also be cool to have Shane change quickly in an alternate scene.
Even though there are 2 werewolves in the chapter you don't get a particularly good feel for them as there isn't much of a description of either one. Lots of ways to reacquaint the reader w/the look and feel of a werewolf so really up to you. Hopefully you get my point.
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I did, and given what happens in this chapter, you've got a good point.
I'll keep that in mind for when a revision is coming.
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Nice work, I really like this chapter for some reason but I can't put my finger on it. Anyways, can't wait for more!
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I'm looking forward to posting more once each chapter is done. Glad to hear you enjoyed the new chapter as well.
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I only speak the truth!
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Now you have me wondering how close Shane's home is to Alex's...
Also wondering if Shane was following (and upwind of) Alex, or if that really was chance.
Nice chapter. I'd swear something is going to go horribly wrong sometime this night.
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Glad to post it. Hopefully I'll have more this month or next.
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