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Published: 2017-03-12 15:24:05 +0000 UTC; Views: 634; Favourites: 71; Downloads: 27
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Commission Information:
Commission Information 4.0STATUS: Open[ Paypal / points ]
TYPE OF ARTS
SIMPLE 300 / $3
[ ONLY ONE CHARACTER ]
SIMPLE + ( contains additional elements ) 350 / $3
ADDITIONAL CHARACTER + 100 / $1
DARK SILHOUETTE ( WALLPAPER + SQUARED + A3 ) 750 / $6
ADDITIONAL CHARACTER + 200
If you like my art, please leave a comment and don't forget to . Thanks!
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Tool used >> PaintTool SAI, Photoshop
Approx time >> ~ 7 hours
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Comments: 21
AkiiiChaos [2017-03-12 15:47:46 +0000 UTC]
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Welp Critiqueable part brought me here ^^
Ok so, I really like how you did the shadows and highlights. They look really nice together with the hair! The hair has lots of colors and work, you can se that, so great work in that. Also the point of view is really nice too!
Now I suggest that you should work a little bit in the eye part, since it's way too big and square-like in compression with the mouth, it makes the mouth look weird. You could add more eyelashes too! and just a tip don't use black shadows since they really mess stuff sometimes and in this case, with eyes, the black shadows make eyes pop out in a super strange form
Also you can barely see the wing so you could add more details to it. And apart from that the other thing that "bothers" me is the ear, it looks amazing but it doesn't fir with the body since is way to fluffy and it seems like you were going to do that fluffy texture all over the body but just did it in the ear and that seems a little off
And those are just my recommendations you don't have to follow them and I don't mean to be rude in anything!!!
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SiMonk0 In reply to AkiiiChaos [2017-03-12 20:03:05 +0000 UTC]
Thanks for your critique ^^
I've made some changes in the picture, maybe now it will look little better :3
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AkiiiChaos In reply to SiMonk0 [2017-03-12 20:08:44 +0000 UTC]
No problem <333
Did you add more fur? In the head and chest?
Oh and also I forgot to mention, other thing you could add, to the eyes, is some more highlights ^^
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SiMonk0 In reply to AkiiiChaos [2017-03-12 21:23:18 +0000 UTC]
I've added some highlights and some fur on the chest ^^
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AkiiiChaos In reply to SiMonk0 [2017-03-12 21:24:59 +0000 UTC]
It looks awesome ^^
I really love your hair style and the fur looks super cute!!!
You did an awesome work <3
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Kukseleg [2017-07-25 14:19:19 +0000 UTC]
Uhu jakieś ostre próby cieniowania. Jesteś na dobrej drodze do dobrego cieniowania. Brakuje mi jeszcze większej głębi i renderu. Pryszczek bym troszke zmieniła, bo wygląda jak dziób kaczki x3
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Victoria-Luna [2017-03-13 15:14:09 +0000 UTC]
śliczniuchne <333
psss... nie polecam dawać w pełnej rozdzielczości bo mogą ukraś arta ._.
proszu, nie bij ;v;
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SiMonk0 In reply to Victoria-Luna [2017-03-14 15:52:27 +0000 UTC]
Dzięki ^^
tak czy siak będą kraść, zresztą większość jest na tyle głupia że nie usuwa nawet podpisów autora xD
no ale nie dawanie pełnej rozdzielczości to jednak dobry pomysł :3
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Victoria-Luna In reply to SiMonk0 [2017-03-14 15:53:34 +0000 UTC]
Nie ma to jak rozmowy z nieznajomymi xd
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illumnious [2017-03-12 17:33:33 +0000 UTC]
I love how you add the extra details on the ear so fluffy
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