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Overall good this is a very nice minimalist piece that has positive qualities that greatly outweigh the negative qualities, however there are a few small technical preferences I will hammer you on.
I've never been a big fan of pointed ears and horns, but it is very fitting in this style with the pointed wings. +1 for consistency here.
The shape of the ear is a bit strange in my opinion, but i will chalk that one up to style, as I suppose you like the larger ears.
No line or fill errors and no layering errors.
I like that you shaded/shadowed the joints to create a better sense of depth, but you only went half way with it skipping shading on some of the leg joints as well as neglecting to shadow under the top mane. In addition to this shading inconsistency is the shading of the mane, I'm not sure if you did this with a gradient or a clipped blur, but it is inconsistent with the light source the rest of your shading implies. The same can be said for the wings, but I can see why you did them the way you did to create a separation in layers.
Overall solid piece, just keep your light source in mind whenever shading and use a consistent method.
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