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SimpleScene — Five Haikus, One Tragedy Line
Published: 2008-07-30 00:13:12 +0000 UTC; Views: 146; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 0
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Description There were the rumours
whispered, quiet, in classrooms
between passed notebooks

and there were the smiles
the snickers heard in English
of the teacher and

his star pupil, eyes
meeting across testing grounds
hands, meeting after

class. Where they would test
more than just Machiavelli, but
anatomy as

well

memorization
perfected, heavy breathing,
unhindered passion

until the door bursts
in
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Comments: 10

skeletones [2008-08-08 23:18:04 +0000 UTC]

putting the stud in study

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SimpleScene In reply to skeletones [2008-08-09 00:12:15 +0000 UTC]

HAH I live for you and your witty lines. Truly

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sailorsobia [2008-07-30 21:01:40 +0000 UTC]

lol, i like it, especially the way its written, very original

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SimpleScene In reply to sailorsobia [2008-07-30 22:24:50 +0000 UTC]

:3 Wooo, thanks Sobia!

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SirCrocodile [2008-07-30 08:26:52 +0000 UTC]

Someone was caught XD

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SimpleScene In reply to SirCrocodile [2008-07-30 22:24:40 +0000 UTC]


in the heat of the moment

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SirCrocodile In reply to SimpleScene [2008-07-30 23:53:44 +0000 UTC]

lol

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VivaciousBodacious [2008-07-30 01:54:30 +0000 UTC]

Hm, I like it somehow, but don't know what to say

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SimpleScene In reply to VivaciousBodacious [2008-07-30 02:37:53 +0000 UTC]

Haha, well thanks anyways

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VivaciousBodacious In reply to SimpleScene [2008-07-30 02:54:27 +0000 UTC]

Not a problem ^-^

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