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BeowulfBeforeXianity [2009-09-16 04:16:47 +0000 UTC]
The gangland theme is playing in my head.
Sorry.
I like it, but I wish the lighting was a little less... Hm... I'd liek to see it with less contrast. Not too much less, obviously, but there isn't enough difference between the level of light in the background and on you for my taste. I feel like there's something there I should be able to see, but I'm missing it because it's so dark.
Composition is wonderful. I don't know how you people make the human body look good through a camera. Weird.
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Yyersya [2009-09-16 04:06:28 +0000 UTC]
Hm... the green back round both adds and detracts from it. It makes the dark figure more striking, but it also pulls attention away since it's so bold... I like the chiaroscuro. [Look at me, using fancy words. ]
I like it, overall. The pose does a good job of conveying what you wanted to.
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simplistic-scion In reply to Yyersya [2009-09-16 04:07:19 +0000 UTC]
Yes! Thanks for the excellent criticism!
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Yyersya In reply to simplistic-scion [2009-09-16 04:09:23 +0000 UTC]
I do my best. Mindless flattery isn't going to get you anywhere.
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